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This chapter was beyond fantastic. Again, still not sure why I like this so much.The detail you put into the scenes make me visibly cringe, but that only means you're doing it right.
I really wish Braeburn didn't have to die. He's my least favorite pony in the whole show, but you made me really feel for him, so I applaud you for that. Can't wait to see how crazy Dash goes on her next adventure!
Oh, and that bastard Blueblood got what he had coming.
1531295 I appreciate the comment.
I actually tried to step things up this chapter, especially after I red your comment on Chapter 2,
about taking back Ponyville being almost easy.
So I'm glad to know you enjoyed it...and that I made you cringe. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy_invert.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
Grammatical errors and spelling mistakes, but who the hell cares?
Heheheh. It's simply not possible to not feel cold satisfaction at Bluebloods torture and death. Particularly beautiful when he bit off his own tongue.
1531904 yeah, it would probably be wise to invest in a proof reader...probably. All the same, glad you enjoyed Bluebloods demise.
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Sweet, sweet irony...
Amazing so far.
So amazing I wrote you a song!
We drink to our youth, for days come and gone
For the Age of Aggression is just about done
We'll drive out the Changelings and restore what we own
With our blood and our steel we will take back our home
Down with Chrysalis, the killer of Princesses
On the day of your death we will drink and we'll sing
We're the children of Equestria, and we fight all our lives
And when Sovngarde beckons everyone of us dies
But this land is ours and we'll see it whiped clean
Of the scourge that has sullied our hopes and our dreams
Down with Chrysalis, the killer of Princesses
On the day of your death we will drink and we'll sing
We're the children of Equestria, and we fight all our lives
And when Sovngarde beckons everyone of us dies
We drink to our youth, for days come and gone
For the Age of Aggression is just about done
1533131 Perhaps next chapter Rainbow should use Fus Ro Dah? dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
1536762 Maybeeeeeh.... Or a dragon helps her kill some big enemy >=3!
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Only Fluttershy can use Fus Ro Dah.
1540782 okay....
As Ryback would say. FEED ME MOAR! I say FEED MEH MOAR LOYALTYS VENGANCE!
1545778 Peace be with you my friend. Chapter 4 is currently being written, and I promise a twist no one saw coming.
1545802 Oooo.... A plot twist. Why can't i like this story 500 times
Man, I love a good dark fic with best pony. The only thing holding you back is grammar, and Dash's voice being a touch off.
1549787 hmmm...
So what do you think needs to be done? In terms of RD's voice?
im putting this on my read later just because of the cover art... i hope im not disapointed
really good, really sad.
Keep it up
ok this is epic it's the first dark story that i actualy will read from the start to finish
Here are some stashes
By the way you just got a new stalker
Blueblood and his like have been utterly crushed... I cannot say that I did not enjoy that!
Why not hold it with magic?
Bloody Bluebitch