It's been a while huh? Well ive been busy.... Umm Dont be mad? I love all of my viewer's... Even the one's who disliked! And I can't wait to show you what's in store (Mwahahahaha) Well anyways I am going to update.... At some point. I'm sorry im running 3 different fanfics!
1: The one you are reading (Duh)
2: Assassins in Equestria (Currently being rewriten)
3: Opposites Attract (And OctyxScratch currently in dev!)
But im not ending it and it will be out! But stay tuned and I love ya <3!
Alt. Titile: Diary Of A Wimpy Princess: Moon Dayz
1782425 XD Mate
You SERIOUSLY need an editor, and to learn how English grammar works yourself.
When you have a story that needs the attentions of you or your editor like this... you wait. You fix the problems you find, and THEN you release it. You're missing commas and other punctuation everywhere, and the sentences not only don't read like Luna... they don't read very coherently at all. Sorry, friend, but you need to let the next one cook awhile longer.
1782441 *Sigh* Yaya ive heard it all before.... I'm working on it ok?
Maybe if you actually get a competent editor, I'll take back my dislike.
1807322 *sigh* Whatever I get the hate.... im rewriting and reediting... later... its late
1951523 Ahh Trollestia at her best, cold blooded murderer