Ever notice it? That one spot where you just can't see a thing?
Applejack never did.
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Oh god... Happy thoughts, everypony, HAPPY THOUGHTS...
SEASON THREE RELEASE ON NOVEMBER TENTH!
REMIXES!
Edit: On another note, this story is actually pretty well done.
1484194 Okay! I got it! Season three! Remixes!
...
OH GOD WHY APPLEJACK!?
Nice horror selection my friend, very nice indeed.
Holy. Celestiaflank.
I... Okay, let me break it down, bit by bit.
First: I saw the title, saw the image, read the description, thought, "Why not?" So, I clicked, opened it up, began to read.
Second: Your writing is excellent. YOU KNOW how to write, and for that, I thank you. I've never read your stuff before, you you've earned a watcher. I am sincere.
Third: I slipped into the reality of this pretty quickly--the Apples' kitchen came alive for me, and I was right there with Applejack and her sister the whole time. I stayed along through the ride, and not even the music put me off.
Fourth: Excellent twist! I was expecting something to come out of the woods, but you did that quite nicely.
(Oh, I feel bad using that AJ expression, now....)
Fifth: Grossout ending was killer. Awesome, awesome, awesome.
I can't praise you enough on the writing--it was succinct, descriptive, it flowed... It was magical.
You have earned my thumbs, my fave, and my watch. If it fits the guidelines, please submit this to Equestria Daily's Nightmare Night story competition.
Inky Award for Excellence.
I'm not quite sure I agree entirely with your music choice. Having seen the video it's more popular for, I can't help but not be able to shake the cartoony, and thus non threatening, feel that is with said video. (Yeah, this show is also a cartoon, but your trying to convey a feeling similar to terror instead right?) Which kinda hindered the expierence for me.
But hey, that's just me, maybe it is an excellent music choice and I'm just an idiot, who knows?
Other than that minor gripe, I enjoyed the story. I find it very nice to read stories like this before going to sleep. :)
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Good story though.
Oookkkaaaaaayyy... That was somethin! Hilarious way to point out biology by the way. That was pretty funny.
On an unrelated note, I think that's an amazing username.
1484345 Thank you for the amazing review, fave, and watch, Inky! Funny you should mention EQD, I actually wrote this li'l beauty specifically for EQD's Nightmare Night competition.
Haven't heard back from them yet, though. Was I supposed to get a confirmation that they got it or something?
1484643 Eh, it was my first try paring writing with music (First try writing a horror fic, too), and to be honest, I probably could've found something else. You do bring up a good point though with the connotation of the music applying its own bias to the overall feel of the piece. Do you have any suggestions for other music that might fit the bill better?
1485588 Why, thank you! I'm kind of a wing-nut, can't you tell?
1489431
Ya earned it, bud!
I don't know if they were supposed to get back to you. Maybe. As long as you sent it in.
The video link is busted now. View/listen here.
The music really helps to seal it! It feels like it's missing... *something*, but I'm not sure quite what. Great story nonetheless!