Who would've thought Fluttershy would fall into a universe of the gender-bent versions of ponies she already knew? Who would've thought she'd catch the attentions of the male version of one of her best friends in this strange world AND a certain red stallion in her home universe? She sure didn't. Now, she lives two lives; one as Fluttershy, the only foal and shy mare of Ponyville, and the other as Fluttershy, the shy "twin sister" of her doppleganger, Timidbeat in an alternate version of her home. But, she has to make a difficult choice.
Special thanks to Troubleshooter for proofreading and editing! Go love them!
Chapters (3)
Cool! Keep it up!
7219848 Thanks! I've already pre-written a couple of chapters, ready to publish! I'll probably release a chapter each weekend. Hopefully, anyways.
keep up the good work, and take a like and track
7236312 Wow thanks! I'll be sure of it. I'll most likely update this story weekly.
Kind of fast pace with these quite characters we have here.... Try to slow down a bit
7236750 Yes, I've felt like I have been rushing a bit. I'm just very anxious to get to the interesting stuff haha
. Thank you for the input, though! I will try to slow down.
Oh awesome idea and a great story! Let me know if you want any help writing!
7256850 Oh thank you! If you're interested, I can share future chapters with you on google docs to edit. I did have one editor for the first ones, but you can never have too many! Speaking of which, I still need to put their name in the description for helping me haha.
7256860 Sounds good to me. Feel free to bounce ideas off me when you need to.
7256865 Ok, I will! If you like, you can PM me your email, and when I have time I'll share the document with you
Regardless of the change being "obvious", I still like the way you did it.
7256888 Thanks! I appreciate that a lot
I thought it was paced just fine lol, I'm loving where this is going, and the idea of a colt fluttershy was awesome. Also I'm liking the names you picked for their counterparts!
7256894 Thanks! I find myself to be not usually all that skilled in pacing. I was pretty happy with most of the names I picked - and confused about some of the main ones used by the internet.
Like, how is Butterscotch going to be the male version of Fluttershy? That doesn't make sense to me.
Also I wanted to be a little bit original
hehehe....