Oh, Planet Equis/Equestria is so f**ked!

Unless, they use the elements before it's too late?

Okay! Besides a few spelling errors, this was actually quite good!

You blended the themes from both universes together without directly copy/pasting seamlessly, while at the same time you created a sense of foreboding and building of terror.

I am very impressed. and I look forward to reading more...

his irl friend here (it seems impossible I know) he made me make an account and I'm quite impressed with this (context I'm a writer with +4 years of experience under my belt) I never thought of him as a writing nerd, I'm very clueless when it comes to MLP because I'm not weird (no offense) but I was really impressed with how he worded some stuff, there were some stuff that made my writing senses tingle, but it was really well worded and I'm honestly incredibly impressed, keep up the work fool, ill be here to help on the way to, just shoot me a comment and I'll rush to help!

You also mentioned potential chapter names, I gotchu fam.
Blood Is On Your Hands,
Death Stared Back,
The Red Caped Murderer,
Anarchist's Dream,
He Seeks Penance.

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Yo, thanks man

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You have no idea hoe happy this makes m for my first ever attempt, thank you.

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wink wink

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I will also edit the whole think with the words where is bolded

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I don't normally say this, but don't get too bogged down with the little details just yet. This isn't a college essay or an application to Harvard; I really want you to just keep having fun writing, and worry about making it perfect later.

Also, I added your story to several reading Groups so it will get more attention.

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Thank you so much.
Also follow the group followers of brightburn that i made and put my story in there as i cant for some reson.

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update i got it working my story is now there!

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Well done.

Fire story, man! I'm glad you took some of my advice and made something great!

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Thank you got rid of the bolding

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my other story will be going into moderation so you may get to read my other story in progress nxt week or when ever.

Compared to Earth, I think Equestria stands a far better chance of standing up against Brightburn, if not outright defeat him.

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Same, still carnage will insue

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I don’t doubt that.

My answer to your "question of the chapter" is, without question, Homelander. You love to hate him

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sick
I do think Omni-man would absolutely kill him but I do think homlander could kill BrightBurn