The ponies here are bipedal, I just like how the image ends up and I'm not very good at drawing humanoid ponies.

Understandable black cut outs are easy to describe it with the background images.

The stallion nods as they both take one of Ragged arms and lift him up, Bliss follows closely before looking back at the mansion "And what do we do about the snot squads and snob nobles? If he really is an alicorn then those assholes pretty much attacked a member of royalty, even if he was pretending to be a homeless pony"

I don't think he was pretending 😂😂
Also love the story, Love the concept and can't wait for more.

An interesting take, and I'm already rooting for Purple! :D

Interesting! Looking forward for the next chapters :D

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Thanks for understanding, I will keep that in mind

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So glad to hear you like the idea so far, behold the Prince of the Hobos! Not to be confused with the prince of the Homos, I'm pretty sure that is a gay bar somewhere in the world

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Don't worry Purple is a pal, took plenty of inspiration from a character in AAA story call Bulk, but slightly different. I'm planning to give him a more significant role later on, and maybe he may also be related to one of the mane six, the question is which one?

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Well hope I disappoint, I'm considering posting the next the day after Master Roshi post his new chapter, consider it a nice little cookie after one big cake treat jeje

The concept is interesting. I don't remember having read a fic of this style. I'm curious to see how far you can develop it.

Moments later, the personnel of a help center for drug addicts were startled when the crazy pony that tried to assault the stallion was violently thrown inside the second floor of the building, unconscious and with a bloody mouth. The stallion walked away and put the rusty night in his bag, using his earnings to buy a book.

Knife?

Nice, I've read Tripple A before and loved it so I'm looking forward to see how this story continues since it inspired you!
The chapter had a couple spelling mishaps but nothing to big, if you keep at it I'm sure this will turn into something amazing!

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I'm also wondering is this also a rgre like AAA? Because so far I don't think it is because i've seen a lot of males in the guard.

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Well at first I consider making Purple a mare but decided against it, thinking it could be a nice spin the nice saint guard to be a stallion for a chance, the mares still outnumber stallions and Canterlot is the capital of perverts in that regard but I want to see how that plays out.

Specially since nurses are about to see Ragged without a shirt.
Also don't get used to that name, is not his name. And more the nickname Purple give him because he is always wearing raggedy clothes. I plan to give him another one soon enough

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Understandable have a nice day

Continue

"Like hell, I will! Dude, you are fucking bleeding right now?" Purple insists, bringing Ragged arm over his shoulder

Is English a second language to you, Author? Not ragging on you, just curious. Your editor either didn't notice it, or what cause there's a lot of little broken pieces of dialogue here and there.

I think the story has potential. Just make it your own thing, don't try too hard to be another story.

"Where's your crown, King Nothing?"

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It is actually, and don't worry. I'm seeking authors and always welcome those that would like to lend a hand there, glad to hear you are enjoying the story so far

I can't help but think of the song seeing the tile

Loving this already

Yeah, I'm Liking this I can't wait for the next chapter.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, keep it up 👍

ooooh a competitor to AAA. i love competition. it breeds creativity. i.ytimg.com/vi/XsOPpquoy4w/maxresdefault.jpg?sqp=-oaymwEoCIAKENAF8quKqQMcGADwAQH4Ac4FgAKACooCDAgAEAEYSiBaKGUwDw==&rs=AOn4CLDmD6Dhrhy94X0MGb0XhWmsrtykHw

oh fuck yes i love these kind of stories

Interesting. I like the premise quite a lot. The pacing is a little fast and the Grammer a tad wonky in places but is also very much enjoyable and can be followed with only a few pauses and re reads.

For English being your second language it's very good. Improvement will come quickly as well.

While I am assuming that Deutsch is your first language, it would explain the somewhat A-typical sentence structure.

Either way, good work, look forward to more.

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Close actually, it Spanish, but thanks

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JA more like an apprentice, AAA is the master and TKON is still barely it Padawan. But let see what the future has in store for both stories

Good story intro.

What is this AAA story that people are referencing as inspiration/competition here? I'm assuming Ascension, Abdication, or Abduction but I could be wrong.

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It is, the story that inspire to write this version.
You read that one and you could see what I mean.

Here is the link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/540211/ascension-abdication-or-abduction

I recommend you give it a view if you haven't yet, is just that good

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JA? which story is that?

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Ah it was me trying to think of an abbreviation for "The King Of Nothing" sorry for the confusion

I fuck with this heavy, AA&A is also one of my many inspirations for writing. Cant wait to read more!

Definitely needs a quite a bit more polish grammar and sentence structure wise, but aside from that an interesting start.