This isnโt your typical human anthro pony harem story. This is a story of human man give the power of hypnosis to bend mares to his will, to get back the life of luxury stolen from him by Twilight Sparkle.
He wanted to pull away, but he wanted to tempt fate. โUm y-yeah it's a new massage technique I learned, but if it's hurting you, I can stop using it?โ He asked, wondering if she'll fall for it.
When he gains more control of his powers is he going to have the ability to turn stallions into mares? It will expand his list of targets if he can do so and changing the memories of all those that remember them as well will prevent any from freaking out. It will be a great irony if Discord gets changed into Eris as a result of Max getting so much power from chaos magic.
11862784 Ok. Will my idea was that be after Max get Zecora, he will find a couple of potions that will turn males into female for 24 hours. He will do a test on Spike and turn him into Barb.
Max is a pretty entertaining ruthless lying degenerate; you're doing a very good job at wonderfully selfish, objectifying power fantasy. Excited to see what'll happen with a real level up.
11862958 With the way you've been writing him; I can imagine both sides of this pretty clearly. Actually looking for or coming up with the idea of a sex swap potion isn't something that would cross Max's mind, and he would have an instinctual 'that's weird and gross' reaction if he was just thinking about it.
As a consequence of Chaos magic levelling up, and just showing up as a thing on his phone โ and then pushed into an opportunity to deal with the results, and the physical reality of a soft, needy mare with all of the cocky cuckable pride of a colt who's been outcompeting him to crush buried on the inside โ I think most of those concerns would evaporate in an instant, and he'd love that expanded experience pool.
Huge TFTG and orientation play fan here, though, so my perspective is a bit biased.
One thing he could do is hypnotize, and ask questions, ask about secrets, desires, fetishes, tastes, etc., both from Pony and from friends and family, like if he can catch Belle without hypnosis, he can hypnotize her and ask about Rarity. , thus he has an advantage over her, since he would know how to act and make her like him more.
11862958 Please don't! Genderbending male characters would actually hurt the story. Firstly it would artificially inflate the harem beyond what most writers could handle. Because max is hypnotizing major,minor,and background mares so the amount of ponies hes is going to bang is already very high even without the men. Which means the character list could become very bloated.
The second issue is that since commenters have a say on who gets hypnotized/fucked, there is a very good chance that a lesser known mares will get screwed out a chapter if more well known genderbended characters ex: barb, gleaming shield are on the table.
The third issue is that it defeats the entire point of this chapter. What's the point in writing chapters that involve cheating if the husband/boyfriend is going to be turned into a girl and brainwashed into max's harem anyway?
The fourth issue is that once genderbended the formerly male characters are going to be written and treated differently than if they had been left alone. I really like the idea of max trying to hide what he is doing from the target mare's boyfriend and/or brother but stuff like that cant happen if they get genderbended.
Not mention if the males get genderbended then max won't have any guy friends to hang out with! How are they supposed to have a guys night out if they ain't guys ๐
But the the biggest thing for me personally is the genderbending that's being suggested is a huge turn off for me. You said that max would be uncomfortable due to them being guys not too long ago and I am of the same mindset. Any lewd scenes they would appear in would kill the mood the scene was going for to me. Because the were guys and that kinda makes it weird for me.
I hope I didn't come off as rude I have been enjoying the story so far!
11873996 Honestly i think you have absolutely a valid reason. And i agree with all of it. I wasn't sure how to properly phrase why i wouldn't do it, but thanks to you i don't have to.
11873996 You have several points, and they are valid in everything, I want to see the lesser known mares appear here, like the mother of smash button? Was that his name?
Something tells me Pinkie won't be as easy as he thinks.
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Perhaps
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I have one idea but I want you to be honest first before I can give them.
How do you feel about a potion that turn males into female rule 63?
When he gains more control of his powers is he going to have the ability to turn stallions into mares? It will expand his list of targets if he can do so and changing the memories of all those that remember them as well will prevent any from freaking out. It will be a great irony if Discord gets changed into Eris as a result of Max getting so much power from chaos magic.
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Hmm possibly, we'll see
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Let me check, might have been an error on my part
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Ok. Will my idea was that be after Max get Zecora, he will find a couple of potions that will turn males into female for 24 hours.
He will do a test on Spike and turn him into Barb.
Max is a pretty entertaining ruthless lying degenerate; you're doing a very good job at wonderfully selfish, objectifying power fantasy. Excited to see what'll happen with a real level up.
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Um thank you ๐
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I'll consider it. Keep in mind max would know that they arw a dude, so for him it would he weird
Ok, I understand. Maybe I think of someone else later.
11862958
With the way you've been writing him; I can imagine both sides of this pretty clearly. Actually looking for or coming up with the idea of a sex swap potion isn't something that would cross Max's mind, and he would have an instinctual 'that's weird and gross' reaction if he was just thinking about it.
As a consequence of Chaos magic levelling up, and just showing up as a thing on his phone โ and then pushed into an opportunity to deal with the results, and the physical reality of a soft, needy mare with all of the cocky cuckable pride of a colt who's been outcompeting him to crush buried on the inside โ I think most of those concerns would evaporate in an instant, and he'd love that expanded experience pool.
Huge TFTG and orientation play fan here, though, so my perspective is a bit biased.
One thing he could do is hypnotize, and ask questions, ask about secrets, desires, fetishes, tastes, etc., both from Pony and from friends and family, like if he can catch Belle without hypnosis, he can hypnotize her and ask about Rarity. , thus he has an advantage over her, since he would know how to act and make her like him more.
PS: more chapter pls
More pls
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Please don't! Genderbending male characters would actually hurt the story. Firstly it would artificially inflate the harem beyond what most writers could handle. Because max is hypnotizing major,minor,and background mares so the amount of ponies hes is going to bang is already very high even without the men. Which means the character list could become very bloated.
The second issue is that since commenters have a say on who gets hypnotized/fucked, there is a very good chance that a lesser known mares will get screwed out a chapter if more well known genderbended characters ex: barb, gleaming shield are on the table.
The third issue is that it defeats the entire point of this chapter. What's the point in writing chapters that involve cheating if the husband/boyfriend is going to be turned into a girl and brainwashed into max's harem anyway?
The fourth issue is that once genderbended the formerly male characters are going to be written and treated differently than if they had been left alone. I really like the idea of max trying to hide what he is doing from the target mare's boyfriend and/or brother but stuff like that cant happen if they get genderbended.
Not mention if the males get genderbended then max won't have any guy friends to hang out with! How are they supposed to have a guys night out if they ain't guys ๐
But the the biggest thing for me personally is the genderbending that's being suggested is a huge turn off for me. You said that max would be uncomfortable due to them being guys not too long ago and I am of the same mindset. Any lewd scenes they would appear in would kill the mood the scene was going for to me. Because the were guys and that kinda makes it weird for me.
I hope I didn't come off as rude I have been enjoying the story so far!
11873996
Honestly i think you have absolutely a valid reason. And i agree with all of it. I wasn't sure how to properly phrase why i wouldn't do it, but thanks to you i don't have to.
11873996
You have several points, and they are valid in everything, I want to see the lesser known mares appear here, like the mother of smash button? Was that his name?
Come on