A rather unexpected creature ends up arriving at the Crystal Empire and with it, changing the course of history forever, for better or for the worse. Set in Equestria At War Universe.
“Nooooo…”, his horrified scream was cut short as Sombra’s very being was utterly disintegrated by all-encompassing light beam. The completely blinding light was seriously hard to even watch, and my closed eyelids did very little to help. I opened pair of semi-blinded eyes and observed nothing but nightcap residing in the floor, ‘I… I LIVE!’
"Nooooo…", his horrified scream was cut short as Sombra’s very being was utterly disintegrated by all-encompassing light beam.
The completely blinding light was seriously hard to even watch, and my closed eyelids did very little to help. I opened pair of semi-blinded eyes and observed nothing but nightcap residing in the floor, 'I… I LIVE!'
‘’What are you?’’, his question held clear undertone of fear as I answered “Somebody who kind of killed Sombra a moment a go and needs to explain current situation to somepony in charge” I retorted dryly as I had understood the necessity of explaining myself to some authority figure so I wouldn’t treated as an monster by the local guards.
"What are you?"
his question held clear undertone of fear as I answered "Somebody who kind of killed Sombra a moment a go and needs to explain current situation to somepony in charge." I retorted dryly, as I had understood the necessity of explaining myself to some authority figure, so I wouldn’t treated as an monster by the local guards.
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