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Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
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i think i'm doing better than the first time. i think it has to do with how this is a rework of something old.
Great job so far I am so looking forward to seeing more. I'm extremely happy bullet is coming around
Ah yes, An high IQ.
Really good keep up the good work
Great chapter. Just a little bit of advice if you do another date chapter I would recommend having them go to lunch or dinner before the main attraction. To me if you go on a date especially a first date it should be special. While the movie was a perfect idea for turquoise along with the shopping if it was me I would have timed it out so that they could've gone to somewhere high with a perfect view of the sunset as the ending. No offense or anything but the end of the date was a bit of a let down because it didn't have a lot of the feelings as to how a date should end. Great chapter still keep up the good work
Good chapter. Looking forward to seeing more
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Some of it may be people with an irrational hatred towards material of this nature. Then there are people like me -- just by looking at the story description, I can tell that if I were to read it, I would downvote it based on sloppy language skills. The run-on sentence that makes up most of the description is a bad sign, and the half-assed approach to capitalization isn't doing the author any favors either.
Just finished catching up with the story and I am loving it so far