oh hey, looks like we're at the romance part!
...and i see that change in the rating from T to M!

edit: yeesh, what did i get this many downvotes for? am i wrong about the rating or something? i could've sworn it was T at first though

Oh my god the fourth wall break at the end and the transformation of Barfy. This is getting so good.

Quick note, some goofups in the beginning of the previous chapter, not sure what happened. You can probably fix those by doing a simple pass of the fic, such as: a missing space or two, an apostrophe missing on "Twilight's episode" and on several parts where you write Anons instead of Anon's, but those are just some of them, and, to be honest, they didn't hinder my ability to understand what you put down so w/e.

Can't wait for the next chapters to come out!

I do believe that Rarity has now received the last piece for the summon. Now come, let us pray.....

Well, if anyone is going to notice those differences, it would be her.

Now I wonder if Barfy's subtype of changeling evolves eventually, 'cause she's transforming and growing away from her previous, ratty, self.

Oh, and Chryssy's panicking in the meantime. Can't wait to see the gathering between anon, changelings, and ponies!

"Rarity."

"Fuck no, Darling."

"C'mon. She'll behave!"

"Absolutely fucking not, Darling."

I love this version of Rarity.

I also love the insight we get into Barfy's mind. I'd love to know more about what she's thinking.

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Frankly, if Chrysalis does find out where Barfy is, it's a tossup whether she tries to 'rescue' her nurse drone, chucking Barfy back in the depths of the hive, or she sees what a properly fed and cared for nurse drone can do/become and mayhaps see the light and stop being as much of a royal bucking monster.

I love this stupid story and these stupid pictures.

She needed to remind the Author to stop including her in all these romance stories, if she wasn't going to get her own. How hard was it to write up a hunk for such a fair maiden like her??

Sounds like Rarity has a skill issue, not an author issue.

Wonderful love story.

Her fin had grown, almost down to her shoulders now -- comparable to a Mane. Her wings, once ratty little appendages that buzzed uselessly, now sat properly closed and folded away. Even her tail, once a stubby protrusion, now draped down her flank.

By the way rarity described her I think she's slowly turning into a queen.

Great chapters!

I'm at work right now and had to suppress my laughs so my boss didn't notice. Loving the romance btw.

Thanks for the updates.

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thanks, keep mixing up trot and canter

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wait, wasnt it always rated M?

Rarity is a marvellous wingmare, she truly deserves her knight in shining armour.

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It was. Someone just felt like ignoring it for some reason.

Awww... It's so CUTE! Can we keep it, Vegeta? Can we keep it?!

Anyway, I just read your story here, and it's just wonderful.

Okay rarity is full on hilarious in this chapter mixing posh with normal cursing. Also I hope anon notices her changing and is just ignoring it due to being as dense as tungsten when it comes to affection.

Lol, Twilight is going to come back from her forced "vacation" in Canterlot like:
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(replacing shining with anon of course)

Live barfy reaction

God I love this story so much

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I love the implications of this meme.

She needed to remind the Author to stop including her in all these romance stories, if she wasn't going to get her own. How hard was it to write up a hunk for such a fair maiden like her??

Please write a story about rarity getting swept off her feet by the ugliest pony imaginable.

How hard was it to write up a hunk for such a fair maiden like her??

Very f'ing hard