Great job Twilight!! Based on his reaction, he has no interest whatsoever in an erotic relationship with a pony.

So far, you girls are failing bad!!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

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I just hope Anon doesn't lose his job over this, considering Twilight isn't conscious to defend him.

Caught a typo and missing word.

...but she spa scene never once caught her attention.

the

Rarity turned __ her still blushing friends...

to

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Much appreciated.

Yeah if you feel like a chapter is bad at the start or something is wrong it's best not to continue and remake everything.

Damn, and Twiggles was trying so hard to behave.

"Like I said, boss," Anonymous smiled, his last recourse lest he fall into the pit of despair.

"I took care of her."

gigglesnort

That escalated quickly. And Twilight might just triple-die out of shame once she recovers and realizes what she did.

I'm wondering who got the better first impression. Twilight or Anon?

ponies are scary yo

Lmao, Anon so good at massages he can make you blow your brain out ! K.O.ed Twilight easily, his legend will be know all over Equestria !

This is so good

This chapter was amazing. I am a little confused though. Is this taking place after Twilight made the whole plan with her friends? Or is this before that and kinda what lead up to her deciding that they should all try to get Anon to bang them?

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It's supposed to take place well over a year in the past, shortly after Anon first came to Equestria. Guess I could have made it a bit more clear.

It's also meant to be Anon and Twilight's first meeting

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Ah, alright. Thanks for clarifying. So in the previous chapter, when Twilight was bonking her head against a tree, that was after this whole affair, then?

I wonder how she'll manage to convince Anon to quench her heat after this whole debacle lmao

As if Twi couldn't be more adorkable, you have her giggle snort..... gah, right in my weakness lol

Your characterization and writing of each of the ponies is fantastic, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Ok this seems more like a flash back chapter that came out of nowhere. I really hope that this continues soon (no rush)

I found out having Heaven's on Fire by KISS play in the background greatly increases the comedy.
10/10

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Bit of stubbornness of my part, yeah. I figured I could work out the kinks as the chapter went on and got a better idea of what worked. Oh well, live and learn.

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Well she did get a mind-melting orgasm out of it, so...

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Glad you think so.

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Yeah, ain't she a cutie? It's so much fun to torment her

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Thanks! I've been binge watching the show to get a solid feel for their personalities and make a(hopefully) reasonable guess as to how they would act and speak in such situations. It's been one of the trickier aspects to get right, bar none, but so rewarding to hear it's paying off.

Twilight left a bad first impression about herself (stupid nature).
the last phrase sounds... two ways, given the context of the situation.

I'm assuming he kept some distance from her for a week or so.

That was cute, until Twi went bananaz. Got daym

Then it became hot

"Rarity's told me about you, you know," Anonymous said.

Okay. This was 2-yrs in the past. I don’t think I’d have figured that out without the A/N.

Makes a lot of sense why Twilight intends to make Anonymous the target.

That sounds pretty illegal of twilight

I really love this story so far, but that last chapter really made me think for a while now and I thought I would share my thoughts here...

So, it was a looking back chapter, - I'm narrowing it down-, so Twi's first real encounter with Anon, and yeah, it was when she was our favorite unicorn at the time.... and she couldn't control herself very much at the end there, althought this time it was cute.

Anon doesn't know that but if we were there and seen it, it wouldn't have been just cute this side of her that is, but a bit ominous and a pretty much unstoppable force being born kind of situation, buuuut, it's not everything I thought I would leave here... It's much more than that.

The real time Twilight, who is scheming with the others is an Alicorn now, and like Celestia said in that message, She is going to experience something that is 10 times worse than when she was an unicorn, you get what I'm saying here? Ohh, and Anon seems -although don't know the real time one, but I suspect, He doesn't expect anything on the mentioned kind of level.

Oh, and a tiny bonus, if it wasn't enough, the longer she resist on that week, well, I don't have to say the rest I believe, just one thing....
Good Luck Nonny, You will definitely need it.
I probably just thinking too much into this, and it will all fine, and on a much lighter tune with our sweet girls...... Right???? I probably read too much Exchange and Zamairiac stories featuring the famous Alicorn Instinct in action.

So yes, you can probably guess I'm really looking forward to see how this continues.

Nice Lil flashback to first meetings, am really looking forward to the next chapters. Twilight spazzin out a there is prolly not the impession she was trying to make. Definitely be watching for moar. 👍

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Hey did you hear that you got some artwork for the fic now?

Damn. I’m not sure how it works in this story, but I expect, barring unforeseen circumstances (like an experimental spell), that mares can generally control themselves during estrus. They’ll be horny and miserable without any aid, whatever form that may take, but they’ll still be in full control of their faculties.

I’m guessing Twilight’s experimental spell had some unforeseen side effects that didn’t manifest until the spell wore off? I highly doubt Twilight would act that way unless something powerful overcame her, and I haven’t seen any evidence that she’s ever acted that way in the past, although there hasn’t been much story yet.

It makes me worry greatly for Anon if Twilight goes into Alicorn Estrus Mode™ without anything to hold her back, as I suspect what happened at the spa would be small potatoes compared to what Twilight would be like if this upcoming heat season comes around without any good plan to deal with it.