A pony suffers from brain damage. Lucky for him, healthcare is free.
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Oh man, you've got that humor thing down pat XD
Thank you for your service.
I think your writing is fine, but then, I've played disco elysium, so I get the thought stuff. It probably doesn't read very well for someone who hasn't played the game. Maybe colour coding the dailogue could help?
Don't take the dislikes too harshly. I don't believe that there's any issue with the story itself, except maybe Disco Elysium is a difficult text to replicate so it will inspire a great deal of subjectivity from readers.
This is me telling you to continue, I've enjoyed every word so far.
I certainly can't speak for others but I and my friends have all spoken very positively about this fic and think it's a fantastic concept.
I think that if you want to continue it you should. I found it great
Ya the thought stuff was tough to understand at first. Good show with killing Kissinger. I love the story. Bi-Sexual is truly the best.