The small town of Sires Hollow was once the largest home to the equestrian thestral population. While they're numbers declined with banishment of the lunar sister and consequently went into hiding outside of Equestria;
11724074 not a chapter update, thats coming soon and its DOUBLE stacked, BUT i would like to inform you since you are comment the most that the story has been edited, and use of the Term "Thestral" has been replaced with something different. it fits better into the cannon in my head for this alt universe and it isnt a word coined by a TERF which is something i learned recently. so yeah just small narrative change going forward. just think Bat Pony when you see the word "Batari." which i learned is also the name of a villain from the cave man Far Cry game lol.
11823007 Mmm, yes. Chapter ends nice and smooth. So nice, so smooth. Didn't expect you to revise so quick tho, considering how life can get. A nice treat, to be sure.
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All in all, Really good!
The Thesteral that got pulled out of the forest, It is eclipse?
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Thanks!
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YEP! Gonna go into more backstory next chapter.
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not a chapter update, thats coming soon and its DOUBLE stacked, BUT i would like to inform you since you are comment the most that the story has been edited, and use of the Term "Thestral" has been replaced with something different. it fits better into the cannon in my head for this alt universe and it isnt a word coined by a TERF which is something i learned recently. so yeah just small narrative change going forward. just think Bat Pony when you see the word "Batari." which i learned is also the name of a villain from the cave man Far Cry game lol.
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Alright then thank you!
Not enough lewdness in this chapter, so no "funny" comment.
This chapter does feel cut in half, tho.
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Fuck it imma making the next one slightly horni
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i heavily revised the second chapter.
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Mmm, yes. Chapter ends nice and smooth. So nice, so smooth. Didn't expect you to revise so quick tho, considering how life can get. A nice treat, to be sure.