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Red049
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Can't wait for the next chapter.
I wonder did he really think playing this game with Twilight within with him on top? Her curiosity is nothing to mess with
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This is Twilight Sparkle we talking about, she will do anything for something that not native to the world. Even if a certain human play a joke, she will go through with it.
It's 2023 and you're writing dialogue in coloured text.
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That's right! Some might like it, and some might not. I decided to test it out as for me personally it makes it a little easier to read. To each their own, though!
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As long as you are consistent, then I don't have a problem with it.
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I absolutely will be!
Colored text is kinda weird
No. Spike you were supposed to be the chosen one You were supposed to destroy the cock blockers, not join them
giggity
Check Pls.
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What's wrong with this part? Is it the terminology for Twilight, or something else?
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Know, could be the term.
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Sure, that works, too. I'll change it, then. Thank you!
Yeah there's no world where a human wins this, wings or not without magic he's losing
everypony
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I think she said that intentionally because Anon is NOT a pony
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You would think so, but that was indeed a mistake on my part. Thank you for the pointer.
I'll only use 'everyone' whenever a human themselves are talking (usually, anyway), and 'everypony' otherwise.
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As long as you dont have the ponies constantly correcting the human like so many HIEs do I dont have that much of an issue with it.
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Usually I'd actually have it the opposite, being that the human(s) in question will use 'everyone' and develop into using 'everypony' to fit in, occasionally forgetting to do so as part of the story. Ironically enough it would appear I have the same problem myself.
tbh, i could definitely see this representation of dashie as similar to the one early in the show. y'know, the compulsive, competitive prankster?
101%, with a 1% margin of error
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That's exactly what I was going for!
Okay, you've got me hooked lol. I have to know what happens next. There's no world in which he beats Dashie in a race unless she somehow trips over herself or he has some plot armor haha.
Only thing that has me a little confused is how you set up Twilight to be very clearly into him and into the idea of pursuing more and now he's just going to try to get Rainbow. Is this a world where herds are a thing and theyll all be totally into the idea of a herd with Anon, or is he kinda just a bit of a manwhore lmao
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The story is generally designed around the chapters being separate from one another, and so the idea of it being some kind of multi-pony scenario isn't really what I aimed for. That said, I tried to write it around the possibility of such, should one desire it. That also kind of explains the situation with Twilight; I was mostly just playing with the concept in the title, but there's the implied idea of previous interactions between the two that could have led up to it, although not necessarily. It's effectively just an idea I thought of where there's likely a lot of logic problems, just for the fun of it.
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Ah, I see. Well I eagerly await the next chapter then!
I thought this was gonna be a story where Anon asks each of the mane six what a French kiss is, and the final chapter would be them presenting their best guesses, but this is good too.
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Even if he had magic he would still lose the fastest human on record is slower than a warthog we outlast animals in stamina. Which could be a way to win but in the end its a fictional story not real doesn't matter either way