A certain practitioner of runic magic has been awakened from a slumber of countless centuries to find Equestria a changed place. Now she must find her new place as the only changeling in Maretime Bay.
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I can fully see Anon using her cooking skills to bribe Opaline into letting Misty come over and play more often.
Redemption? Might take a shit ton of chapters but the talks between anon and Ophaline would be interesting to read, like Harry Potter and the Prancing of Ponies with Tom and Luna
Every once and a while, declare peace. It confuses your enemies.
As much as I would love to see anon testing opaline's alicorn durability. Especially since I know she has spells that could turn the upstart into fine red paste.
Opaline really is a joke without her alicorn power, her only real means of meaningful influence over others is convincing others to act as her proxies, and she's clearly not competent at convincing people into that without what amounts to indoctrination.
As far as villains go, she's kind of a chump, at least in this era, lazy and lacking personal skills, even the basics like cooking, which you just know would land her in tons of trouble if she didn't have Misty.
Nice chapter! I really like the talks between Anon and Opaline. I can see just the tiniest inkling of doubt in Opaline. Hopefully you steer this in a direction that would be better than the stupid asinine ending of Opaline’s arc that Make Your Mark did.
Seriously it was just so bad and literally contradicted things Opaline said herself earlier in chapter four. It’s like the show writers can ever bother to remember what they wrote. In any case I eagerly await your next chapter!
Divergence from cannon plot YaY
Its not that I want to hate Make Your Mark but seriously is it that hard to stay consistent for one season sometimes they can't even do it for one episode
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Without her powers I'd say Cozy Glow is more dangerous than her and she's literally a filly but at least she has the power of deception, the only power Opaline has is to ruin G4 continuity and make it look like Twilight lost to a moron
For Anon's next vlog,
From Best_Served_Cold: "Honestly Pipp deserved more for the whole kiss debacle. You should've turned into Zipp and threatened to kiss her then."
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"I'll make you lasanga if you let Misty come over!"
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Turn Opaline into an Eldritch Garfield.
I like your story direction so far, even if it diverges greatly from canon. Everything Anon does feels cozy and home-y. I especially love all their interactions and dialogues!
I will believe Anon would hate fuck Opaline during the next Hearts and Hooves day or when the estrus season kicks in.
A random fact: the Gypsy Bard song, I heard that the word gypsy is a vulgar term that is supposed to be on par with the "N" word. Enough that the original singer for the song had to apologise years later when she found out. Still a banger song, regardless.
Here's a "personal" question for Anon's vlog: "Am I a bad pony? How do you cope with your mistakes? We had to give up our son after he was born. He was the cutest colt you could have laid your eyes upon. But he was different from us. I don't know if he is still alive out there."
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Hatefuck day: "Hey, Opaline. Guess what. I'mma lay eggs in you." "Can we please not?"
Damn it Pinkie, stop breaking the fourth wall to teach Anon songs from across the multiverse!