Another great chapter, but I do feel for Bon Bon as I was dragged from one place to another every couple years growing up so know a little of what she is going through. I loved Beauty and the Beast, but the animated was the best version while, believe it or nor, I never even seen Titanic. Hopefully Bon Bon will have an easier time than she thinks with the move.
Well colour me intrigued. Incidentally, I completely agree with Storm's critique of Titanic. Like most of Cameron's work, it is a technical masterpiece, but suffers from dawdling pace and overwrought emotional affect.
Other than some minor formatting issues, your story structure is well thought-out, your prose is straight-forward and relatable, and the premise is fetching. I'll mark it as Tracking, and I look forward to seeing the story unfold.
“Something funny over there, Titanic?” Storm turned and faced me. I resisted the urge to facepalm. I absolutely loved the Titanic. A very romantic movie. Wish someone did that for me. Minus the letting me go and letting me drift away to die in the ocean. That part sucked.
Wasn’t Jack dead at that point?
“Oh yeah a great movie. She literally let go of him to die while she’s saying I’ll never let go Jack. Who the fuck says that? The nerve of that girl was through the fucking roof. She should have pulled him on the door with her. That was a big ass door and had more than enough room for one person. Absolutely ridiculous!” Storm fumed while Sprinkle grinned.
It would have been in the water and both of them would have froze though.
Short but good and the more you know
Another great chapter, but I do feel for Bon Bon as I was dragged from one place to another every couple years growing up so know a little of what she is going through. I loved Beauty and the Beast, but the animated was the best version while, believe it or nor, I never even seen Titanic. Hopefully Bon Bon will have an easier time than she thinks with the move.
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The Titanic is amazing lol
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Might have to give it a watch, and I'm so sorry, but I just realized I never gave a thumbsup yet, so have one for a great story! đź‘Ť
Well colour me intrigued. Incidentally, I completely agree with Storm's critique of Titanic. Like most of Cameron's work, it is a technical masterpiece, but suffers from dawdling pace and overwrought emotional affect.
Other than some minor formatting issues, your story structure is well thought-out, your prose is straight-forward and relatable, and the premise is fetching. I'll mark it as Tracking, and I look forward to seeing the story unfold.
Cheers.
Wasn’t Jack dead at that point?
It would have been in the water and both of them would have froze though.
I've done that and survived all that happened is I ended up puking my guts out