I have no idea who this Quill Heart is, an OC? Or was it a fake name? Changeling?
Chapter 2
Interesting to see Fhuman x Fmare. Will we see FFF threesome with Bon Bon joining in? I assume there will a focus on hands in use.
Chapter 3
Well that was an interesting perspective with Flim/Flam and their interactions with Ponyville. When we got to the double penetration, was expecting vag/anal rather than just spitroast.
Also, I'm surprised Nora wasn't more suspicious with the brothers due to them bringing her out to a cave and all.
~Will we see other sapient/sentient species or only ponies? Changeling (your head canon on how their shapeshifting works? I would assume they would not be able to change into a human since Nora is so much larger or they can but it requires more Love energy.) Minotaur Griffins Diamond Dogs
~ Will Nora encounter Poison Joke? What would it give her as a joke? Lead in for Nora to meet Zecora?
~ Group rates on the menu now? Or 200 bits flat per customer involved? Will Nora be invited for parties? (Intro with Pinkie getting involved?) Stag parties?
~ I'm very intrigued in how the Main6 storyline will develop. Continue to be the straight men in the sexual situation or more along the lines of just as sexual but out of sight of Nora.
~ Will Nora travel and experience other territories and their cultures (specimen)? Random scenario: Nora travels, gets her purse stolen: A: culprit caught, Nora rewards police. B: Nora has to provide services to get by on the trip.
Some interesting speculations. I can neither confirm nor deny anything right now
I do have some scenarios planned out for future chapters, as well as some more overarching plotlines, but I keep thinking of more in the time it takes me to write. This'll probably be a rather long fic, and Nora will definitely continue to get around - a lot - so expect variety, especially with her partners. No promises on incorporating any specific idea, obviously, but I never say no to inspiration, so seeing comments full of ideas like this is interesting.
I considered throwing in some anal with Flim and Flam, but the mental image of them rolling her back and forth on that barrel was too good not to use instead, and there's always plenty of customers out there
I'm still not sure where exactly this story fits in the show canon - I mentioned Starlight already, so that puts it in the later seasons, since I wanted a fuller range of characters to use. I've actually not seen a decent chunk of the show, or seen it in dribs and drabs, so I'll have to work out details along the way in that regard. I literally forgot Sugar Belle existed when writing the frist chapter, so when I hinted at the timeline more in chapter 2 I guess I accidentally made Mac a cheater - whoops
I don't think it'll cause any huge problems for the story, though.
Looking at your bio it looks like you're in a similar boat since you've not actually watched MLP, so I'm glad we've got something sorta in common!
Fun fact: stallions cum a lot. She had taken plenty of loads in her days as a prostitute, but it was always an ordeal - much like the size factor, being subjected to a stallion shooting inside you was something you could expect, but never qutie grow accustomed to. At least, Nora hoped she wouldn't.
quite
"Well you were the one hogging her all to yourself, borther," Flim retorted, holding his hooves out in a conciliatory gesture but not capitulating completely. "I don't think you'd have much rather been in my position, while you were rutting her senseless like that."
brother
Flim shot an ecstatic smile, walking up to Nora's rear as she tapped on her ass to punctuate the point. Flam sulked, looking more than a little jealous, despite having just coated her insides minutes ago himself. Instead, he circled around to her front, where he head rested, supported by chest which the barrel propped up. She had to steady herself with her feet to ensure she didn't roll too much - the object certainly wasn't designed for such purposes.
her
As Flam came down from his peak, unleahsing his orgam, he slammed a hoof on the barrel between Nora's head and a resting arm. It didn't look at all intentional, but this blow was too severe for the vessel, the wood breaking under the might of the strike and cider shooting out of a newly made hole right under Nora's face, soaking her in yet more fluids.
orgasm
Well, easy cum, easy go. Still, these two were businessponies by trade - she may have missed a good opporutnity, there. A few extra bits never hurt, and she had technically given out four freebies today. Tut tut, naughty Nora.
Pity Flim and Flam always end up screwing their proposals, otherwise they and Nora could really make bank all around the world.
Dang, Nora is just a stupid decision engine, isnt she?
Chapter 1
Aw, I was hoping for more Big Mac.
I have no idea who this Quill Heart is, an OC? Or was it a fake name? Changeling?
Chapter 2
Interesting to see Fhuman x Fmare. Will we see FFF threesome with Bon Bon joining in? I assume there will a focus on hands in use.
Chapter 3
Well that was an interesting perspective with Flim/Flam and their interactions with Ponyville. When we got to the double penetration, was expecting vag/anal rather than just spitroast.
Also, I'm surprised Nora wasn't more suspicious with the brothers due to them bringing her out to a cave and all.
Other Comments
~ Future tags?
Fisting
Double Pen
Airtight (triple pen)
~Will we see other sapient/sentient species or only ponies?
Changeling (your head canon on how their shapeshifting works? I would assume they would not be able to change into a human since Nora is so much larger or they can but it requires more Love energy.)
Minotaur
Griffins
Diamond Dogs
~ Will Nora encounter Poison Joke? What would it give her as a joke? Lead in for Nora to meet Zecora?
~ Group rates on the menu now? Or 200 bits flat per customer involved?
Will Nora be invited for parties? (Intro with Pinkie getting involved?)
Stag parties?
~ I'm very intrigued in how the Main6 storyline will develop. Continue to be the straight men in the sexual situation or more along the lines of just as sexual but out of sight of Nora.
~ Will Nora travel and experience other territories and their cultures (specimen)?
Random scenario: Nora travels, gets her purse stolen:
A: culprit caught, Nora rewards police.
B: Nora has to provide services to get by on the trip.
Eager to see the next chapter.
-Sky66
11616810
Thanks for the detailed comment!
Some interesting speculations. I can neither confirm nor deny anything right now
I do have some scenarios planned out for future chapters, as well as some more overarching plotlines, but I keep thinking of more in the time it takes me to write. This'll probably be a rather long fic, and Nora will definitely continue to get around - a lot - so expect variety, especially with her partners. No promises on incorporating any specific idea, obviously, but I never say no to inspiration, so seeing comments full of ideas like this is interesting.
I considered throwing in some anal with Flim and Flam, but the mental image of them rolling her back and forth on that barrel was too good not to use instead, and there's always plenty of customers out there
I'm still not sure where exactly this story fits in the show canon - I mentioned Starlight already, so that puts it in the later seasons, since I wanted a fuller range of characters to use. I've actually not seen a decent chunk of the show, or seen it in dribs and drabs, so I'll have to work out details along the way in that regard. I literally forgot Sugar Belle existed when writing the frist chapter, so when I hinted at the timeline more in chapter 2 I guess I accidentally made Mac a cheater - whoops
I don't think it'll cause any huge problems for the story, though.
Looking at your bio it looks like you're in a similar boat since you've not actually watched MLP, so I'm glad we've got something sorta in common!
New chapter soon (probably) btw
quite
brother
her
orgasm
opportunity
Magnificent chapter. All I hoped for and more ♡
Very well done 👍