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Blegh... I told you I wasn't finished with that chicken corn chowder, and yet you still threw the ricotta and brie in.
twilight must be of shea's blood line but how maybe caro I hope I rellyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy hope so with rose it will be M/F/F threeway
i really enjoyed this chapter! thanks for uploading
2698504 Keep on reading and commenting as you see fit, then. Good to have you here.
Got a 2 at the end there
Should that be peeking not eeking?
Edit: and that ending. Only partially called it. Don't they know you never split the party?
2713566 How the pfargtl did that 2 get in there?
Anyway, I took special care to ensure the party would be separated by means beyond their control. One thing's for sure, nopony in the group saw it coming. Look forward to the next chapter, dude.
2713668 I'd assume that 2 made its way in around the time you started sinking ships.
I look forward to the next chapter and also pray I get to reading it in a timely manner (and pointing out errors).
2713742 I'm already 4.5 thousand words in. Count on it being finished by next week at maximum.
Something that I Really needed to say. No. No. No. There is hardly any character development for rosemary, no reason for shae to like her at all.
It kinda' felt like you just ruined the story, this was a big mistake, like i said before, no character development for rosemary whatsoever. if you're rushing it, or intended it this way, whatever the case may be, you have to get rid of this ship. This is not me bashing you or your work, but something that I felt had to be done.
Well.
Clover's in league with Shokenda? Didn't expect THAT.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I really like all the Dragons Dogma references! They work very well! Plus the music is just fricken awesome in general!
Alicorn amulet, you sly dog
Another eerily similar reference to the falling out of the Ministry Mares (AKA the Mane Six) in Fallout Equestria. Just downright eeire that is...
That plot twist came at the right time.
Clover was TOO perfect, sans the flinching at Shae and Rosemary. Characters built up to be idols almost always go rogue, too, although I sorta hoped Frosthelm would stick around as a baddy.
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....i keep seeing people as their skyrim version... clover is fucking arcano *as in he killed the teacher... not about the part supporting the rebellion*