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I have updated and it's going to be fun from here.
It? What is 'it'?
Good to see that Spike is willing to comfort Charity in an emotional situation, but he should also be worrying about Mac, who is also his friend, and also conflicted about liking Mac's special somepony...until both Charity and Mac confer with him and let him know that they're both okay dating him.
Otherwise good addition to the story! Nice to see how you've paid attention to everyone's character traits as the story has progressed.
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Thank you