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TheKing2001


Only by studying the past can we win the present.

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The Wonderbolts realized they wronged Rainbow after falsely accusing her for sending Spitfire away. Knowing what they did was wrong, Soarin and the others try to fix their mistakes at the urging of Spitfire. Even if they didn't get ordered by their captain, they were going to apologize anyway. They quickly find out forgiveness isn't just given out.

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Comments ( 19 )

This is actually interesting. Usually in some stories not forgiving someone is seen as a bad thing, here I’m guessing it’s understandable. I also never seen a story where someone is forced to make amends.

Some wierd mys here.

Anyway I hated that episode or at least the Wonderbolts in that episode, other than Spitfire of course.

Give them hell. They deserve it.

Interested in where this is going.

Comment posted by TheKing2001 deleted May 21st, 2023

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I usually love Soarin but he made me mad as fuck that episode.

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Same, the other Wonderbolts showed docuebaggery before that episode, but not him.

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Well tbf Surprise and High Winds never really did anything bad. They just stayed in the background. They're some of my fav wonderbolts

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Yeah I meant more Fleet and Spit.

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Ye. I think they redeemed themselves later. Except that Rainbow crash episode. If I was rainbow, I'd have done more than talk. I'd have beaten them up

The rainbowshine and missy conflict was actually interesting. Usually when a character makes a threat every character gets scared, but it’s interesting to see a character bite back.

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Yeah the Wonderbolts have been written erratically the entire series. No surprise there lol.

Something i noticed

She flapped my wings and sat down at her spot in the corner away from the others

my? You did it again at the Sandwich part.

About the wonderbolts, soarin is my Favorite

I hope it goes well and a pregnant mare, related to any Story?

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Nah I just threw it in there

ahhh no pressure but this story is so great so far! if you ever decide to continue i bet a lot of ppl would excited! ur writing and storytelling is amazing!

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Ty! I an update is coming very soon:).

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