Cozy Glow finds herself trapped between worlds, the only way out is to navigate the darkest Abyss in the entire multiverse: Hell. Where she must confront the sins of her past to have any hope of escaping her eternal torment.
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wow, I enjoy that I can't wait for the next chapter for this... I'm excited. The story is pretty interesting for the beginning and it makes me want to see this continue even more... Keep up the good work.
Having read Inferno I have to say, your blending and incorporation of mlp characters into the story feel solid and fresh. The beginning is intriguing and I really like how Sunset acts almost as an antithesis to Dante; instead of accepting the Heaven/Hell binary, Sunset's (very in character) point about everyone having the capacity of redemption, provides additional nuance to the story that the original Inferno doesn't really have. I look forward to reading more, nice job!
A good start.
Literary tip: if you want to echo The Inferno, end each chapter with a reference to the stars, just as Dante did:
“…down into the dark abyss, away from the stars.”
It’s not necessary, but anyone familiar with the original work will get the Easter egg. Nice adaptation so far!
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Good point. Didn’t notice that detail before. Will make sure to include reference to the stars at tge end of each chapter from now on.
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I’m an English graduate and a Dante nerd so I think of these things. 😆
This is really well done; Inferno is not something easily adapted to other genres.