In the world of Lackadaisy, a speakeasy that's down on it's luck is visited by a mysterious woman who wants to do business with the madame of the operation.
Welp, Pony Celestia's reputation is forever destroyed.
I highly doubt the likes of her sister/Luna, Cadence, Shining, and especially Twilight and her friends will ever "rescue" or forgive Celestia for a long ass time.
Especially if Twilight's own parents and the other's own family members want to intervene eventually to forced their daughters/granddaughter/sister; the Mane Six to not do anything really stupid against Sunset.
P.S. I know that you're doing the "Twilight is blindly loyal" cliche once again. But maybe finally learning the truth about Celestia will finally break through her "devotion" and actually make her own choices for once.
P.S.S. And please, for the Love of God. DON'T make that over cliche example of "cleaning the sewers with your tongue" in this story for Twilight's blind devotion/loyalty.
You already overused it in The Boys storyline, you don't have to do it again in this one.
Besides, I already GIVE you MANY different, and rather brutal and life-threatening examples on how far Twilight might be willing to go, but in the end she will never do it because of her moral views. Use those suggestions instead, finally use them for once please.
These specific comments I made that are ironically from The Boys storyline;
P.S.S.S. It does suck that you didn't waited to have Sunset get way "better" technology and weapons from future era's like World War II and the Cold War/Vietnam War.
But considering that despite having rather old World War I's/Late 1920's tech., weapons, and vehicles. Sunset STILL took over Equestria by storm anyways!? Thought this would be a rather "fair fight" unlike the other stories, but guess not.
I mean wow, I know that the guards suck, but damn!
So, despite rushing this to take over Equestria already. What is Sunset going to do now? Is she going to reveal her true royal and "alien/extraterrestrial" nature to the rest of the cat world?
How would Sunset fare against future conflicts like World War II and the Cold War/Vietnam War anyways???
But please don't make her just automatically to easily win those brutal conflicts just like with Equestria. Cat's aren't gonna be like total pussies like the ponies!!!!! ( Find it ironic and poetic from saying that? )
Because, you're just going to turn her into a dang Mary Sue by this point.
11819133 The setting is in the days of gangsters, and speakeasies like in the comics, which I like. You should read it. I started right after seeing the pilot cartoon
Okay, but that still doesn't answer how Sunset will handle future conflicts like those in the cat world? And hopefully don't make her easily win them like a Mary Sue.
I’m still working on the aftermath and how Sunset rules over her new kingdom and how Earth reacts to magic and that gods can be summon and how the faiths power base falls apart now that anyone with the right know how hare able to summon their god and talk with them not blindly following the words of any holy man.
Welp, Pony Celestia's reputation is forever destroyed.
I highly doubt the likes of her sister/Luna, Cadence, Shining, and especially Twilight and her friends will ever "rescue" or forgive Celestia for a long ass time.
Especially if Twilight's own parents and the other's own family members want to intervene eventually to forced their daughters/granddaughter/sister; the Mane Six to not do anything really stupid against Sunset.
P.S. I know that you're doing the "Twilight is blindly loyal" cliche once again. But maybe finally learning the truth about Celestia will finally break through her "devotion" and actually make her own choices for once.
P.S.S. And please, for the Love of God. DON'T make that over cliche example of "cleaning the sewers with your tongue" in this story for Twilight's blind devotion/loyalty.
You already overused it in The Boys storyline, you don't have to do it again in this one.
Besides, I already GIVE you MANY different, and rather brutal and life-threatening examples on how far Twilight might be willing to go, but in the end she will never do it because of her moral views. Use those suggestions instead, finally use them for once please.
These specific comments I made that are ironically from The Boys storyline;
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P.S.S.S. It does suck that you didn't waited to have Sunset get way "better" technology and weapons from future era's like World War II and the Cold War/Vietnam War.
But considering that despite having rather old World War I's/Late 1920's tech., weapons, and vehicles. Sunset STILL took over Equestria by storm anyways!? Thought this would be a rather "fair fight" unlike the other stories, but guess not.
I mean wow, I know that the guards suck, but damn!
So, despite rushing this to take over Equestria already. What is Sunset going to do now? Is she going to reveal her true royal and "alien/extraterrestrial" nature to the rest of the cat world?
How would Sunset fare against future conflicts like World War II and the Cold War/Vietnam War anyways???
But please don't make her just automatically to easily win those brutal conflicts just like with Equestria. Cat's aren't gonna be like total pussies like the ponies!!!!! ( Find it ironic and poetic from saying that? )
Because, you're just going to turn her into a dang Mary Sue by this point.
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The setting is in the days of gangsters, and speakeasies like in the comics, which I like. You should read it. I started right after seeing the pilot cartoon
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And working on the aftermath idea board of what to write next.
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Okay, but that still doesn't answer how Sunset will handle future conflicts like those in the cat world? And hopefully don't make her easily win them like a Mary Sue.
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Did you read my first comment of the day? Because you didn't link it like my second one?
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That’s been done
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Which specifically?
I do talk a lot in these comments, so I don't really know which you're referring of "that's been done"?
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The twilight thing.
I’m still working on the aftermath and how Sunset rules over her new kingdom and how Earth reacts to magic and that gods can be summon and how the faiths power base falls apart now that anyone with the right know how hare able to summon their god and talk with them not blindly following the words of any holy man.