Years have passed since she had been betrayed and abandoned, and while she may have remained content to torment Celestia by harming her subjects, getting replaced as the Princess’s student made Sunset decide to stop pulling her punches.
Having heard of another mare that had been abandoned and betrayed by the systems Celestia had put in place, Sunset goes out to see if this ‘Mane-iac’ could help her, but she didn’t expect her to smell and look so lovely...
Cover Art: 2496481 on Derpibooru
A Demon Shimmer x Mane-iac romance fic for the Sunset x MLP Villains Competition.
Chapters (1)
pretty good!
Why isn't there a alternate universe tag?
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I suppose I didn’t think about it.
It has it now, though.
Complete already? Huh. I thought this was going to be a longer story. Oh well.
Nice characterization of Mane-iac and Sunset. I love that Sunset went full supervillain and stayed in Equestria to torment Twilight and Celestia.
And of course a Power Ponies crossover is always fun to see. I love the implication that Mane-iac may have a condition forcing her to laugh.
Two bitter loners hanging and plotting their revenge was pretty fun to see. Especially these two. It's a great premise for a series.