I'm trying! It's just... nyrggh... resisting... me...!
Yes, thank you for your completely unsolicited opinion, you braying halfwit!
It's fine! I've got it! I just need to concentrate! Pinkie, shut him up for me!
Are you a fundamental force of the universe? No? Then kindly don't lecture the draconequus who is about how to properly rewrite reality! You don't see me lecturing you on how to be a nerd!
Thank you, Pinkie.
Everypony, stand back. I said stand back!
Dear chaos, my magic really doesn't like what I'm trying here. This might just be too harmonious a change for me to handle.
No, I can do it! I know I can do it! I've turned planets inside out! I won't be stopped by a little thing like...
No... no! It's no use! Everypony get away! I'm losing it!
No, Fluttershy, I was wrong! I can't control it! You have to take the others and get out of here! I don't know how much longer I can—
I wonder what Discord was trying to stop but ended up making it worse?
This is insane how you're telling a story solely through demise
Absolutely love the concept but I'm already starting to cry
I think I like this more then some stories with descriptions. There is a vividness? Vividiness? To the dilaogue that really allowing you to imagine whats going on since so much is implied (which in my opinion is the best kind of writing.)