Luna is planing to maker her own Elements of Harmony but she needs the help of the most loved and hated background characters you may have heard of. The princess of the night has lost her powers, with Nightmare Moon sealed within her she has a second chance at life and she isn't wasting this one. In secret she has been searching for ponies who have the elements within them. If Celestia could do it why can't she?
You will find your most favorite of characters in here, but not so much as the Mane 6 but what I would like to call the Fane 6! (My First Fanfic YAY)
Chapters (3)
Well here it is
I know its not as long as the other fanfic you guys read but The other chapters will be longer, I hope 
Feel free to comment! 
hmm this is good will continue
I like it, but it could really use some editing.
awesome dude
I hate to be a troll, but there's a lot of mistakes. And plus, I didn't quite understand the guys in the streets who were talking about trixie.
Overall though, I think you're doing great!
I enjoy this story so far, it's definitely unique. You've got a tracker in me!
139629 Oh your not being a troll. Just tell me whats wrong and I'll fix it!
Excellent story brah
i really like it i normaly have not problem with mistakes or needing edits i cant tell anyway
This is good, but you might want to look up comma usage and just general sentence spacing. Still fantastic!