To be honest, I think most of the info here could have been explained in a conversation somehow, or at least in a way that flows...because it was REALLY hard to read most of this chapter (until we got to the conversation between Val and Anna, then it was smooth sailing.)
Still a good chapter, just notes for future times like this
I wonder why he doesn't use magic to fix his vocal cords.
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Is that possible? another question can he even use magic?
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What isn't broken couldn't be fixed.
I like this alternate-universe here, that's not ruled by some of the main princess characters from the show.
To be honest, I think most of the info here could have been explained in a conversation somehow, or at least in a way that flows...because it was REALLY hard to read most of this chapter (until we got to the conversation between Val and Anna, then it was smooth sailing.)
Still a good chapter, just notes for future times like this