I think this chapter was written relatively well though if I must have some constructive criticism was there a magic on Fluttershy that made them act a bit mad at first or was that just them being for one reason or another mean I'm just curious of what caused them to attempt to degrade the heavily armored Warrior no offense I'm just curious everything else seemed pretty well written and I hope you keep on writing this great story
11461583 In Season 2 of the show, the beginning two parter of the season is Discord's return. During the said two parter, Discord pulls some mind games on Twilight's friend's that causes them to become the opposites of their respective elements.
Kindness becomes Cruelty, Generosity becomes Greed, and so forth.
Essentially, when Fluttershy becomes cruel, she attempts to attack Yharim's self-worth through her words, but that obviously didn't go so well.
There were some harsh words said in this chapter
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I think this chapter was written relatively well though if I must have some constructive criticism was there a magic on Fluttershy that made them act a bit mad at first or was that just them being for one reason or another mean I'm just curious of what caused them to attempt to degrade the heavily armored Warrior no offense I'm just curious everything else seemed pretty well written and I hope you keep on writing this great story
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In Season 2 of the show, the beginning two parter of the season is Discord's return. During the said two parter, Discord pulls some mind games on Twilight's friend's that causes them to become the opposites of their respective elements.
Kindness becomes Cruelty, Generosity becomes Greed, and so forth.
Essentially, when Fluttershy becomes cruel, she attempts to attack Yharim's self-worth through her words, but that obviously didn't go so well.
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Aw thank you for the explanation and you're writing is amazing thank you such great work
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No worries.
Hell yes. Another terraria fic for my collection. Keep up the good work man i hope to see more.
i hope to see more of this my self