That was amazing! More!

"He went down to the barn where he and AJ constantly fucked, and waited." wat...
This story freaked me out not gonna lie, but I was just laughing at the end
I should also say to fix the tags a little bit I mean, an adventure in 1000 words? And you should also add Spike to the character list since he is the one who got....er nevermind.

Dafuq.

Where do I even begin with this so called "comedy" clopfic?

Well for starters, the pacing is atrociously bad. Everything goes on way too fast. You basically kill Spike for no reason then to get some sort of cheap laugh about him being raped. The clop is terrible and the story is asinine. There's nothing funny in this story at all, so why have the Comedy tag? Unless you think Spike getting killed by being raped is funny.

BIG MAC FUCKED SPIKE THEN HE DIED AND TWILIGHT KILLED HERSELF. The end :)

I was this close to shotting my self.......thiiiiiiiiiisss close

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Eeeenope.

My feelings about this story.
You obviously have no knowledge of the proportions of ponies thingamajigs.

Where are the Trainwreck Explorers when you need them.

no

1327312 *Sierra raises an eyebrow*
Very well...

YOU FUCKS CAN'T APPRECIATE MY FUCKING GODDAMN GENIUS. I. AM. A. GENIUS. IS IT MY FAULT YOUR RAGGLEFRAGGLE-ASS BRAIN CAN'T COMPREHEND THIS WORK OF FLIPPIN AAAART. _|_
Love yall <3 favorite and subscribe!

1327206 Bitch, please. Of course it's funny //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png

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Come at me HAY-DURRS.

I've seen so much here that this doesn't phase me in the slightest.

How do you die from extreme penetration?

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Definitely trolling.
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1327343 cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-dlaugh.png He said genius and 'work of art'.

1327312 Do we really need to come to talk about a trollfic? I mean, come on, it's just a bad trollfic; nothing more and nothing less. I don't really feel there is a need to give this any form of criticism or talking about. We will come just because we know it's bad, but that's about it. If you got a problem with it, comment on it yourself; don't be a lazy ass American. That is all I have to say.cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-ddealwith.png

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha, TWE Admin

1327399 Ikr? I kind of actually don't find it funny in the slightest bit because this isn't the first 'Spike-dies-from-Big-Mac-extremely-penetrating-him' story I have seen. I think this is the 5th, so it got boring really fast.cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-cpwhat.png

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We're here. Although, it seems that most of us (me included) don't think this is worth our time.

NATOstrike ~ TWE Railroad Maintenance Engineer
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I think my sisters cute.
I think my sisters cute.
She has a pretty good smile,
I dream about kissing her lips.
Granny Smith, says no no no.
But oops, I did it anyway!

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Count 'em. Zero. Your story should actually have fucks taken away, that's how crappy it is.

By the way, you should apply to be Wanderer D's Obnoxious Writer character in his "How to" posts. You seem to fit the bill perfectly.

1327550 Nice, I like that stamp! *saves to archive*

10/10 would fap.

Bad trollfic is bad.

50 words in: huh.. its one of those
300: say whhhaaa...
1000: WHAHAHAHA

Boy, that escalated rather quickly.

*Reads description*
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I saw the title and was like , I guess I'll give it a read.

(One read later)
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Thumbs down for the tape but thumbs up for makeing me lmfao ... hays poor little spine... I honestly would have thumbed up if spike wasn't raped and burryed but hey good story tho... infest would have been a little less... violent.

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1327732 Yes

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There is only so many words I can drag out of my vocabulary to say how awful that was.

Applejacks reaction: Pinkies reaction: Fluttershys reaction: Twilights reaction: Spikes reaction: Rainbows reaction: Raritys reaction:
Trollestias reaction: And trixies reaction:

My reaction: SOO MUCH RAPE!!!!!!!

1328607 YAYAY! OCTAVIA!

WTF

Honestly I couldn't give two fucks about spike but i know he deserves better
and another thing....WHAT THE FUCK MAN! Is this how you get your kicks! making big mac take shrooms and ass raping spike!
your capable of better clops I hope to see mind blowing manuscripts in the future.
now if you'll excuse me I must get back to savung the world from evil time lords with a time traveling rubix cube.
sincerily
Rubix ultimatum
( Gaurdian Angel 1)

Nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope

here is what i think about all of you
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here is what i think about all of you
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what the fuck.................. i don't quite know how to even reply to this. so i'll give it my best shot off the top of my head.
First, Rape isn't funny. its horrible and it just shouldn't be made fun off, and i'm not talking sudo-rape because that's acting, ya know like when your fillyfriend says how good you are in bed.
Second, your obviously being a troll, trolls are scum who make peoples thoughts about the internet what they are today, and this is the only time i'll ever be feeding you.
Third, i'm not following you but if i was, after a story like this i'd un-follow.
And last but not least, how deranged must you be to write a fic like this?! what was going through your head? was it "oh lets take everything socially objectionable and throw it together! see what sticks" even by current standard of the internet i'm disappointed that a fic like this exists.

now if you excuse me i have to go back to reading good fic's. The zoo keeper just told me to stop feeding the animals.

Do you use the Metric system or something? Because if his dick was 16 feet long it would have went out the top of his head like sticking a head on a pyre.

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