Not really a fan of the Rule 63'd mane cast, but I figured I'd give this a read anyway. It was pretty well written, but I noticed one error in the following sentence:
1327946 Thanks. I hate it when that typo gets through.
1327990 I suppose that's fair, but at least a few of the future stories will be romantic in nature. Plus, casual doesn't mean completely free of romance now does it?
1329187 I usually like to include lube in my works (at least to a degree), but the requester specifically asked that I not include any in the story. In this case the lubricant of a sort is supposed to be magic. As for your comment about foreplay; you're pretty much right there. I'll keep that in mind for the next story in this series.
In the meantime please take a look at some of my other stories. I hope that you enjoy them.
Second time reading r63 clopfic, still getting used to the names but other than that, it's still pretty hawt. I'm gonna keep track of this to see how it goes.
Not really a fan of the Rule 63'd mane cast, but I figured I'd give this a read anyway. It was pretty well written, but I noticed one error in the following sentence:
You used "you're" instead of "your".
MY GOD...
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So... Why is this tagged romance? I thought it was just casual sex.
1327946 Thanks. I hate it when that typo gets through.
1327990 I suppose that's fair, but at least a few of the future stories will be romantic in nature. Plus, casual doesn't mean completely free of romance now does it?
Isnt it spines instead of spike?
You know, I had been thinking that what this fandom needed was more r63 Mane 6 boinking each other.
I'm so glad someone agreed, and knew a writer they could talk into providing it.
A bit short on foreplay, and lube, and such. But not too bad.
not bad
1329187 I usually like to include lube in my works (at least to a degree), but the requester specifically asked that I not include any in the story. In this case the lubricant of a sort is supposed to be magic. As for your comment about foreplay; you're pretty much right there. I'll keep that in mind for the next story in this series.
In the meantime please take a look at some of my other stories. I hope that you enjoy them.
We need AJ and Blitz spitroasting Butterscotch and brohoofing, stat.
Oh, and letters to the Prince. Oh god, letters to the Prince.
One: I liked it
Two: I thumbs up it
Three: I look at your penname, thinking of something funny and nice.
Four: I clicked watch and now...
Get ready for the punch line...
I am watching That One Brony, lol! I just made a nice joke.
Again, it was very nice.
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I think the general consensus is "Barbara" (Because of the "barb" pun)
My face about half way through this: Why am I reading gay pony pornography?
...
Well, got this far, might as well finish it.
You get a thumbs up for making me question my sexuality.
Second time reading r63 clopfic, still getting used to the names but other than that, it's still pretty hawt. I'm gonna keep track of this to see how it goes.
damn gay clop
shooda known
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Hey firespiritorelric, I could not help but notice, you were missing a few words in your comment. Let me add them for you.
Damn, gay clop is great.
Should have known, it would be fantastic!
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If you are having trouble with the r63 names, I suggest reading "on a cross and arrow", the source of most r63 names.
Also, it really is a brilliant Fic. Plus, it's SFW.
Next chapter, please update, want more... <3 ;)
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I thought it was barb.
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