Months after Jason Wright's invasion of Equestria, the Cutie Map summons the Elements of Harmony, Spike, and Princess Celestia to Griffonstone, where they meet an unexpected individual: a second human.
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Heh that’d what happens when you’re writing at nearly midnight. Fixed.
i finished the previous chapter as this one was posted. first time for me and i wonder what will happen...
So Equestria Girls is canon here as well?
Granted, that should've been obvious given the tags. Even if it's only going to be references.
But right now; all ties (if there were any in this verse given the context) are permamently severed. Would not be surprising if the image of Princess Twilight is forever destroyed once the other (humane) girls find out. Let alone the rest of CHS.
Though I wonder when this takes place and if Sci-Twi is part of the Rainbooms or not? She will definitely be appalled & disgusted when she finds out what her counterpart did. (It's been awhile since I've read A New Ending)
Then again, the line "her new human friends" is the only hint we have for a possible time frame as maybe after Rainbow Rocks?
If it is then would the events of the Friendship Games come into play?
Cause then it would be quite the spectacle for everyone in Equestria to eventually see the EG humans and the final confrontation between Midnight Sparkle and Daydream Shimmer.
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Yeah, I was wondering about Sci-Twi too
True! I was like, "For a creature who is responsible for the torture of an innocent human, he seems to be forgiven too easily."
The party has started boys, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Pardon that I've never read the first two parts in which this is a sequel so I'm gonna wing it & say this.....
Seems like this Jason Wright is the tride & true example of 'one bad day' but molded into a long period of time via his torment from people he thought were his friends that did him dirty with Discord being the main perpetrator! Him ending up this way after all that seems like a realistic situation.
A person could only take so much til they snap!
Discord ending up murdered by essentially his own creation is karmic justice regardless of how Fluttershy feels about him now. (trust me I really feel bad for her but me personally? It's "Fuck that drac!") Dude was a physcho tormenting an innocent person. I ain't surprised it came back to bite em in the end. I can only hope Flutters finds some peace of mind eventually in the aftermath.
Every bad beginning doesn't mean a bad ending. Pray that Jason can understand or it'll be too far gone for him.
Excited for this new human in town! Wonder how the world's gonna react to another one of Jason's kind.
This is one hell of a dark story. Definitely gonna read the beginnings when I have the time because man is this fucked up version Equestria interesting! Call me intrigued beyond belief! 👀
I think there is one too many negatives here.
Very emotional chapter. I hope to see more.
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Yeah discord never thought about getting a taste of what he wished dish out. I'm not sure what this human can do fix this mess beyond make them realize how stupid their prejudice was and that he wasn't ever a monster and they were.
thanks for the great chapter!! It was nice you mentioned Sunset Shimmer, I loved that part. It was cool all the POVs will you write Luna, Shinning Armor and Celestia's POV, maybe also Chrysalis? that would be so cool. Again thanks for the update
Damn this was a really good chapter in terms in world building and setting up character motivations. We know all about the mentality of the Mane 6 and why the Map selected everyone and sent them to Griffonstone. Well done! Looking forward to the next chapter!
You know, Sunset's inclusion and everyone wondering about the rest of the CHS crew hits on some fridge horror: What if Discord's spell wasn't limited to Jason?
I've been doing a quick reread of the previous story and Discord's spell altered their perception of humanS...plural. Now for everypony else, this just made them shun and harass Jason since he was the only human they knew...but a Twilight running on "humans are monsters" thinking would have, oh I don't know....shut down the portal to a HUMAN dimension and cut contact with anyone there? Meaning she would have left Sunset in the lurch if she called for help...
...like when her friends suddenly stopped remembering they were friends and treating her like a bully again?
Sunset may have major reasons to be almost as pissed at Twi as Jason was....
I'm curious as to how characters like Trixie would react upon learning what the M6 did.
Color me intrigued! Took a bit of reading to remember the original, it was what seven years ago. Turns out, it must have left a mark because I somehow remembered most of it. Now we have heartbroken heroes, fractured friendships, and damaged dreams... what's this? Everything was destroyed by a human, can it now be salvaged by a human? Nice Karma :)
I wonder how long they will ignore the blinking cutie marks?
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That probably still depends on when the invasion took place.
I will admit that I did heavily edit my original comment:
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But I did add that the line about Sunset telling Twilight to never contact her again also included the line "her new human friends" as a possible hint.
I do think these events happened sometime in between Rainbow Rocks and the Friendship Games.
At least, it's something "I" think is a possible timeframe if Twilight reluctantly kept the portal and then reluctantly went back to CHS when the Sirens showed up.
But that's just speculation on my part unless morbiusgreen adds more references in later chapters to give some more cohesive information.
I do have to wonder how the changelings themselves have changed from Jason taking over.
YOOOOOOOOOO
I've been waiting for this sequel for fucking YEARS!
LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I wonder if Chrysalis has mellowed out during the time Jason has been in charge of the hive. Or, a better question is how is the hive doing since their occupation of Equestria. Because it was made clear during the previous story that some of them were not comfortable with what they were doing to the ponies.
Loving the story so far, keep up the good work. :3
I’m sorry, but sunset trying to call out twilight doesn’t work for me when you actually compare the two.
What threat?
That kind of always confused me. They always seem to forgive the worst of the worst.
I honestly don’t know if she’s right or wrong about that.
Lightning, shut up. Shouldn’t you be putting some ponies in danger right now?
Red? Why?
Seven? Why seven?
Really excited to see how this plays out.
Foot*
And*
If they screw up, Equestria might not survive a second Jason Wright...
Maybe that’s just something humans do, she had sometimes thought to herself. Murdering, pillaging, razing villages to the ground… Besides discord who did Jason Wright Kill
Even after everything that they did… “Ponies Revisited” is heartbreaking. These characters are so consumed by grief and guilt that even three months later, they’re still having nightmares about what happened. Just… wow.
Amazing job, author!