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Ok, I just caught up and this doesn't deserve the downvotes at all. While it's no work of Shakespeare, its not too bad either. The story is pretty good. Your chapter scenarios are well done, your conversations are pretty smooth.
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Point I hadn't thought of. So your saying that reders imagine themselves as Anon and they cant get past this version is a female because of the name?
Perhaps renaming her FemAnon. There are several character uses of that name here. (or just Annie)
Either way, I don't see this as a failure of a story at all. Not even close. Its a strong start for a first story. Perfect? No, but not bad either.
a really good chapter.
So good! Only 10 chapters in and I’m loving it!