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You are going to die. Pinkie Pie is not. This is a happy story.

All 6000 words were written in a single unbroken-by-anything-including-bathroom-breaks-session using a keyboard and not voice to text.

Things get pretty weird.


Cover art made for but apparently not used by 4EverfreeBrony for his Chant of Mirth song by The Floating Tree

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That feeling when your chapter title hits a character limit somewhere.

"Zestalt" might be a typo, or it might be an incredibly fitting neologism for anything meshed together with Panka Po in her rambling pink glory.

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Typo, but with help from my non-brony nerd friend I showed this to, I realized the perfect neopropism or whatever they're called:

Zeitgeistalt

Tramp, I’m sorry, but this is unreadable. Maybe it’s because I’m looking at it on a phone, but that first block of text has so many asides within asides and so much sheer volume that I can’t parse it.

I skipped to the end and I appreciate the sentiment, but when I have to skip past well over half of the fic, something’s gone awry.

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I appreciate your honesty and that your response is numbered with the numbers 1 3 and 4 and nothing else

Something did indeed go awry. Pinkie and I got trapped in a web of tangents

I think I had a migraine processing this (the wall-of-text format didn't help), but it was an interesting stream of consciousness read. Kinda like a mix of Grant Morrison and Neil Gaiman, on caffeine.

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Glad you enjoyed although enjoy might be too strong of a word.

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Nah, I did enjoy it.

That’s a lot of stream-of-consciousness.

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yeah, deluge-of-consciousness might be a more appropriate term :rainbowwild: (lol apparently duluge is also the name of a torrenting program horay for cheeky naming schemes XD

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