Celestia was emotionless before she turned around and walked to the doors before she spoke one last line, “I shouldn’t have saved you from those griffons.” Before shutting the doors as Theo’s world shattered around him and his cold state cracked as tears welled up in his eyes as his mother-like figure, his own teacher, wished she hadn’t saved him when he was a slave.
One; So OOC, and WTF is wrong with you, Celestia!!!!!????
Two; I hope that her, Twilight, the Mane Five, Shining, and everypony else that betrays or mess with him gets what they all f******* deserve.
And Three; Doesn't Celestia realized that he has saved her ungrateful life back then!?
See for yourself;
He tried to get somepony or anypony’s attention but they were all oblivious to the danger the Princess was in as the Griffon aimed at the Princess. Drawing upon everything he had left, Theo’s horn glowed an angry yellow before he yelled as a beam shot from his horn and hit the Griffon in the chest and missed his shot as the arrow landed beside Celestia’s hoof as she looked up and used a knock out spell as the mercenary fell to the ground.
Without him. She would be fatally injured, or even DIE!!!!!
I hope that you make him scornfully remind her for that.
“Girls come on, we have to check on Cadance.” Twilight spoke before they all passed him and giving him cold glares as Theo paid no attention to them at all as he looked at Princess Celestia who was walking towards him.
What!? Including Fluttershy and Pinkie?
Then Ponykind itself has truly LOST their chance for his "mercy" then. 😤
Kinda feels like everyone has had their OOC meters cranked to 11 in order for this to work. I don't mind it though because I'm here for Black Adam badassery so fuck it. Just don't turn this into a "wronged my entire life but willing to get rid of any negative feelings at the drop of a hat" kind of story.
Agreed, and I thought Twilight being a little too OOC is bad!?
But this? This is so OOC for Celestia, that it's toxic!
This is just a uninspired and dull excuse for our Black Adam MC to get his revenge on them all.
( No offense, John Lock. )
Look, I'm not actually against revenge/revengeance plots and stories of our protagonist/MC. I like those kinds of things. But, forcing the ponies to be unrealistically being OOC cruel as the "cause" itself is the offensive problem to me.
I seen this same author/writer "tactic" happened over 50 times from other stories. And that's why I have a poor taste on seeing either Celestia or the Mane Six to being OOC cruel b****** against the protagonist/main character, as a dumb unoriginal excuse for a revenge plot.
One; So OOC, and WTF is wrong with you, Celestia!!!!!????
Two; I hope that her, Twilight, the Mane Five, Shining, and everypony else that betrays or mess with him gets what they all f******* deserve.
And Three; Doesn't Celestia realized that he has saved her ungrateful life back then!?
See for yourself;
Without him. She would be fatally injured, or even DIE!!!!!
I hope that you make him scornfully remind her for that.
What!? Including Fluttershy and Pinkie?
Then Ponykind itself has truly LOST their chance for his "mercy" then. 😤
Kinda feels like everyone has had their OOC meters cranked to 11 in order for this to work. I don't mind it though because I'm here for Black Adam badassery so fuck it. Just don't turn this into a "wronged my entire life but willing to get rid of any negative feelings at the drop of a hat" kind of story.
Okay interesting premise but I have to call b******* Celestia would never say that
This would work better if you removed the ponies you clearly don't want to be writing and posted it on AO3.
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Agreed, and I thought Twilight being a little too OOC is bad!?
But this? This is so OOC for Celestia, that it's toxic!
This is just a uninspired and dull excuse for our Black Adam MC to get his revenge on them all.
( No offense, John Lock. )
Look, I'm not actually against revenge/revengeance plots and stories of our protagonist/MC. I like those kinds of things. But, forcing the ponies to be unrealistically being OOC cruel as the "cause" itself is the offensive problem to me.
I seen this same author/writer "tactic" happened over 50 times from other stories. And that's why I have a poor taste on seeing either Celestia or the Mane Six to being OOC cruel b****** against the protagonist/main character, as a dumb unoriginal excuse for a revenge plot.
You have to do a bit better than that.
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And Twilight sparkle cheating seriously that's almost just as unbelievable 🤣
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A acronym that stands for Out-of-Character.
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And why would she need to cheat she also a magical prodigy I can imagine this being something sunset in her evil days would do maybe 🤔
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I know! I just realized that by now. This is something what bully Sunset will do, NOT Twilight! This is why I'm upset about it.
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Thank you for clearing that up
Considering that right this Celestia has to be a changeling that's the only way it would make sense