I have to disagree with you about the representation of anti-Brones. They would not be so invested As to make something is intricate as FOE. If anything they represent the Clop community.
Also I don’t mean offense but Well your hearts in the right place there is often a danger when you post descriptions of your intentions so Blatantly. I just hope that your work doesn’t suffer because of it.
11325222 Also forgive me for looking into this a little to hard but I’ve always found grievance stories a little irksome.
Don’t get me wrong you can write whatever you want but what separates this from every other FOE revenge fiction that’s been produced? All somebody has to do Is read your description and basically saying “the kamen riders show up and kick Caribou ass. Next!” The problem is that The hero comes in and steamrolls them with little to no resistance. If we know how this is going to go down then why bother reading? Other than those who have a hate on for FOE. The Caribou are usually written as so grossly incompetent they can never win. There are no stakes to the fight. (I am about to read this so maybe I’m wrong.) But under most circumstances the Caribou are so dumb You question how they managed to keep their power.
11325497 That's what I said because there's no origin story about Dainn and how he became a tyrant in the first place. I mean Chrome got some of it right on KR Jam about him conquered the Crystal Empire and almost ruled Canterlot if it wasn't for Jam. Plus, he did wrote about Dainn had Discord's power but he didn't tell how he got it.
I have to disagree with you about the representation of anti-Brones. They would not be so invested As to make something is intricate as FOE. If anything they represent the Clop community.
Also I don’t mean offense but Well your hearts in the right place there is often a danger when you post descriptions of your intentions so Blatantly. I just hope that your work doesn’t suffer because of it.
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Thank you
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And about the clop part, it seems to take things too far and stuff.
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Also forgive me for looking into this a little to hard but I’ve always found grievance stories a little irksome.
Don’t get me wrong you can write whatever you want but what separates this from every other FOE revenge fiction that’s been produced? All somebody has to do Is read your description and basically saying “the kamen riders show up and kick Caribou ass. Next!” The problem is that The hero comes in and steamrolls them with little to no resistance. If we know how this is going to go down then why bother reading? Other than those who have a hate on for FOE. The Caribou are usually written as so grossly incompetent they can never win. There are no stakes to the fight. (I am about to read this so maybe I’m wrong.) But under most circumstances the Caribou are so dumb You question how they managed to keep their power.
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I believe it is out of dumb luck or something about the caribou thing
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Just got done reading your first chapter not gonna lie I think my fears are laid to rest. An interesting origin story for Dainn.
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I know, most others don't tell about his origin story
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That's what I said because there's no origin story about Dainn and how he became a tyrant in the first place. I mean Chrome got some of it right on KR Jam about him conquered the Crystal Empire and almost ruled Canterlot if it wasn't for Jam. Plus, he did wrote about Dainn had Discord's power but he didn't tell how he got it.