A tired detective unwinds by having sex with his wife and her mare friends.
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... Okay. Not Treehugger. Not yet. Now we have Moondancer next. A very plump and obese Moondancer. When did she decide to gain weight through ice cream? Rarity, I understand, but Moondancer? She doesn't strike me as the type to let herself go like that. She must really need that motivation.😁
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Well not super obese, she's just gained a bit of weight that's gone mostly to her butt. 😅
And depression sucks. She really needs to get out more and her friends can only do so much for her. The love of a stallion is something different... 😏
Plump and Sassy, dat ASSy as well, Moondancer is great. And with Coloratura in that last chapter along with Moonie now you're basically hitting all the mares I love. In ways I dig, nice. Inspires me to chomp the metaphorical bit and write clop myself. So I can say it's what I like...just wish I could write good.11301038
Hey, it'll come to you over time, friend. This story wasn't something I just came up with overnight. As you can see, this is a sequel to a 300+ long chapter fic (which took a full real-life year to finish) in which Pale saves not only Cozy Glow but all of Equestria along with everyone he knows and loves. This fic here is more or less his "downtime" in that he's treating these mares with some love since they're super lonely and the stallion population is very imbalanced which makes it hard for them to find anyone. Pale is here to give them the affection that they've been missing. Moondancer especially is pretty lonesome after being a hermit for so long. Her friends are one thing, but the affection from a stallion is something she's secretly wanted and can't find so Pale intends to give it to her.
Point is, you'll be able to write this good if you keep at it and give your writing a purpose as I've did mine. Don't give up, friend. But I do appreciate the praise and plan on writing more spicy bits. Stay tuned!