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Oh my, this is spicy even without them kissing out. Also definitely an improvement from last chapter.
I think that all the editing, and extra editing, really paid off with this chapter.
The dialogue really flows more fluidly, and the prose is as strong and descriptive as ever.
Great job, B.
Very good story, been tracking since that first chapter. Got me lookin forward to the next
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I strive to impress!
Any notes or suggestions? Or is this chapter good to set sail?
~ Yr. Pal, B
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Not without help from my broski! Thanks for being quality assurance.
~ Yr. Pal, B
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Appreciate you reading this story of mine! I can only hope that you continue to do so.
~ Yr. Pal, B
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Personally, I think you may have just written the best Romance I've ever read in this site. Keep up on clarity and you should be golden.
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Thanks, pony boy!
~ Yr. Pal, B
Wait are their going to be some neigh sayers to this couple and why do I feel like their going to have a kid soon?
Also I think it was rarity final wish to get them together.
This story you're weaving is going really well, and I'm looking forward to where this is going.
Only realised when staining the couch came up, but wouldn't they have entered the building soaking wet? Did I miss a mention of Rainbow removing her hoodie/jacket or was this lost in transition? Could have had a little steamy imagery as the water on Spike literally boils off that would make the mentioning worthwhile