Okay, this was probably the best one yet. There's a much better buildup of tension, and the conflict just feels stronger than usual. There's some subtle world-building that it would be legal for Cadence to do whatever she wanted with any humans, and other ponies would do nothing worse than rolling their eyes. Humans are second-class citizens, which makes me curious about how the young ones get along. I also want to see a day in the life of Cadence, Colt, and Sofi a week later. I'm guessing the humans are now naked, so one fun scenario might be for Shining to mount his wife, and the arousing situation compels the humans to join in humping, making them reluctantly accepting of the few benefits of their predicament.
I hoped Sofi would join him
Okay, this was probably the best one yet. There's a much better buildup of tension, and the conflict just feels stronger than usual. There's some subtle world-building that it would be legal for Cadence to do whatever she wanted with any humans, and other ponies would do nothing worse than rolling their eyes. Humans are second-class citizens, which makes me curious about how the young ones get along. I also want to see a day in the life of Cadence, Colt, and Sofi a week later. I'm guessing the humans are now naked, so one fun scenario might be for Shining to mount his wife, and the arousing situation compels the humans to join in humping, making them reluctantly accepting of the few benefits of their predicament.