Chapter Two “The Truth Hurts”
Sunset stood at the sidewalk, furrowing her brow as she watched the bus fade into the distance. She pursed her lips before rubbing her chin. However, her eyes widened at a realization, and she turned, inhaling sharply at the sight of someone sitting by her abandoned purse. Once the street had cleared of traffic, the girl rushed across and passed the main statue. Yet, she slowed upon recognizing the hint of lavender and pigtails sitting in her place.
Aria sat with her legs crossed, lifting her bemused gaze from the diary in her hand. “So is this what you like to do with your free time? Write to your friends in Equestria? That’s pretty convenient. I sure wish we were able to do the same when we were banished here.”
“Why are you reading my diary?” Sunset lowly questioned, her voice apprehensive. She held out her hand, glaring at the siren, “That’s supposed to be private.”
Scoffing, Aria shrugged before snorting. “Then, don’t leave it open next time.” She tossed the item to the girl, earning an exasperated glare in return, but the siren paid it no mind, glancing to the side, “Besides, I only read a little of what you had left open. I honestly could care less about what you do in your spare time.”
Frowning, Sunset stared at the girl for what seemed like minutes before her demeanor eventually softened. “This is actually the first time we’ve talked alone since the Battle of the Bands, isn’t it?”
Feigning ignorance, Aria placed her hands over her cheeks and dramatically gasped. “Wow. You finally noticed.” Her face scrunched as a scoff escaped from her mouth. “You really are dense.”
Sunset’s expression fell, evident by her lowered gaze. “So why now then?”
Aria used a pinkie finger to trace the inside of her earlobe, shrugging dismissively. “I was just hanging around until I heard you and your friends talking about me,” she muttered, rolling her eyes. “While I appreciate you trying to stick up for me, don’t bother. If it wasn’t obvious enough, I don’t want anything to do with that group. I can barely tolerate you as is.”
Sunset arched a brow. “Is there a reason why?”
Agitated, Aria gritted her teeth and snarled. “You’re seriously asking that? Well, thanks to you and your friends, we were blasted by a rainbow horse and utterly humiliated at the Battle of the Bands. Sure, it was for a good reason, but that doesn’t mean I have to like it.” She pointed a finger at the girl while scowling. “Plus, I can’t sing anymore. Do you know what it’s like for a siren to lose that? It’s in our blood to sing, and you all took that from us.” Pausing, Aria inhaled deeply and sighed while allowing her anger to subside. “I knew you were dense, but I’m actually surprised how insensitive you are.”
“Insensitive? I’m not…!” Sunset declared, trailing off as Aria’s words steadily sank into her mind. Slow to respond, the girl clenched her free hand into a fist before narrowing her gaze. “That wasn’t the intention. We were just trying to stop you from taking over the school,” Sunset reaffirmed, edging forward while standing her ground, “Look, I’m sorry that you lost your ability to sing, but you brought this on yourself.”
Aria eased back, shrugging her shoulders dismissively. “Hey. You were lucky. We heard about your little incident. After you bullied everyone, turned into a demon, and blew up the front of the school, your friends checked on you. We didn’t get that luxury from you at all. It’s weird that even the costumed weirdo was nice enough to check in on us.”
Sunset opened her mouth, ready to protest, but her words sank into her stomach, evident by her defeated expression. “Oh, no. I didn’t.”
Huffing, Aria simply shrugged. “Relax. I don’t hate you or your friends for it. Like I said, you did what you had to for good reason. My problem is that you carried on like it never happened, and yet you’re puzzled as to why I wouldn’t like you. Give me a break.” She turned to the side, pausing to gaze at the clear skies overhead, “Just because I don’t hate you doesn’t mean I have to like you. Seeing that the lot of you didn’t even care what happened to us reinforces it. So yeah. I just don’t care about you. If anything, you remind me of someone who’s just as entitled, and it’s annoying.”
Folding her arms, Sunset narrowed her gaze. “Okay. I get it, and I’m sorry. I know when someone has a grudge. Trust me. I used to be good at that.”
Huffing, Aria managed a dry chuckle. “Guess I wasn’t as subtle as I thought,” Pausing, the girl exhaled before returning her gaze to Sunset, “We’ve never been able to get along with Equestrians, and I just can’t shake off how I feel. Can you blame me, pony girl?”
Sunset’s eyes widened briefly. “Wait. How do you–?”
“We were able to tell the second we met you. I can smell your Equestrian stench a mile away. You ponies smell so… frilly. I don’t like it,” Aria snorted, frowning while scowling. She trailed off, tapping a foot against the floor impatiently upon catching sight of Sunset’s pale complexion, “Don’t worry. I won’t tell anyone.”
The pair stood in silence for an awkward amount of time until Sunset eventually relaxed, evident by her lowered shoulders. “Well, don’t call me that. I left that life behind a long time ago. Besides, I never interacted with a siren outside of you and your sisters.”
“I know, but you Equestrians are all alike. You spout friendship and acceptance, but you never gave sirens a chance. It’s why you were so quick to banish us,” Aria whispered, glancing to the side.
Blinking, Sunset raised a finger objectively. “I thought you were banished because you were trying to take over the world… like you three tried again here.”
Slow to respond, Aria cleared her throat as her face flushed to a shade of pink. “That was Adagio’s idea. Don’t change the subject. Besides, it’s not like anyone ever asked why we tried such a thing.” Waving her hand dismissively, Aria sobered before crossing her arms, “I’m here because I heard you talking about Peter. You’re wondering why he doesn’t trust you? Look in a mirror, you hypocrite.”
Taken aback, Sunset furrowed her brow. “What do you mean?”
Aria paused, staring back at the other girl with a look of bewilderment. “And I thought Peter was dense. You really are stupid. What is it about geniuses being so damn dumb?” Exasperated, Aria rolled her eyes while scoffing hashly. “Whatever. I don’t care anymore. If you have to ask, then you don’t deserve an answer.”
Reaching out, Sunset snatched hold of Aria’s collar before glaring intently. “I’m fine with you not liking me, but don’t push it! I may be reformed, but I’m not above decking you if I have to!”
The corner of Aria’s lips curled into a dark smirk. “Wow. This is a first. An Equestrian resorting to physical violence, and it’s a unicorn? Here I thought all of you ponies were too fluffy for your own good.” She took hold of Sunset’s hand before pulling it away, freeing her collar. Exhaling, Aria stepped back and grumbled. “Look. Peter’s keeping his distance from you, and it bothers you. How the hell do you think Peter feels about what you’re doing to him? You’re the pot calling the kettle black. Stop looking so close, take a step back, and you’ll see the bigger picture.”
Sunset opened her mouth, ready to protest, but she paused, glancing to the side. “I…Argh!” Throwing her hands over her face, the girl fell to a step and shook her head sadly. “God. I’m so stupid. I’ve been insensitive to everyone lately. Peter. You. It feels like I haven’t learned a thing!”
“It’s a two-way street, pony girl. You can’t expect others to open up when you won’t,” Aria stated, pausing once sniffles escaped from Sunset. Clear energies emitted from the girl before they rushed into the siren, causing her to inhale sharply involuntarily. Aria’s eyes softened while she glanced to the side shamefully. “Okay. Look. You’re different from Peter and everyone else. I get that you have to figure things out, but if you want things to change, maybe you have to start opening up. Peter’s not complicated at all. Give him the same energy you want, and he’ll return it tenfold. It really is that simple.”
Lifting her head, Sunset wiped her face clean with a forearm. “You’re… right. I’m still trying to learn from my mistakes, but maybe it’s time I start trying to move on,” Nodding, she managed a smile, “Thank you, Aria.”
Grumbling under her breath, Aria shook her head. “You’re a weird Equestrian. Why am I, a siren, having to give friendship advice to a pony? Friendship is your schtick, not mine.” Retching inwardly, Aria turned before steadily walking away. “Well, whatever. I just wanted to point out the obvious. Whatever happens next is on you. Just don’t blame others for your mistakes.” Aria soon gestured an empty wave with her back still facing Sunset, eventually raising a middle finger. “You still suck, by the way.”
Arching a brow, Sunset held a bemused glare. “Glad to see I’m number one in her book, too.” She soon placed her diary back into her purse before sliding its strap around her shoulder. “She’s right though. I have to talk to Peter soon.” Biting down on her lip, the girl chuckled sheepishly. “Hey, Pete. I’m actually a talking pony from a parallel dimension. So, anyway, want to grab some lunch?” Inhaling deeply before sighing, Sunset could only venture into the school with a defeated expression. “I hope he likes ponies and older women.”
Amidst lunch at Crystal Prep, all of the students conversated and ate casually. Near the back of the room and out of viewpoint, Peter sat alongside Twilight with a pair of empty bowls under him. He poured the remaining contents of his container within the third, slurping the coup down instantly, and Twilight simply watched with a widened gaze, dumbly holding an orange in her hand. Once finished, Peter wiped his mouth clean with a cloth before chuckling sheepishly.
Blinking, Twilight stammered about. “Um, you’re not quite what I expected.” She furrowed her brow as she slowly peeled the skin from the orange. “You were recommended to Crystal Prep, but you certainly don’t act like it.”
“That a bad thing?” Peter questioned, arching a brow, “Nah, I was actually worried about that. I was only transferred here because my old school got blown up, and my aunt thought it was a good idea to give this place a try”
Twilight managed a smile as Peter unbuttoned his vest. “It’s not. I don’t really fit in either. I guess I’m just happy to see that I’m not the only one,” She trailed off, glancing to the side shamefully, “I’m sorry if that sounds selfish.”
Peter’s eyes widened before he shook his head. “No way! Don’t think like that. Empire State was pretty standard in terms of hierarchy, and I was at the bottom of the totem pole there. By default, I don’t stand a chance at such an elite school.” Stealing a glance at some of the students glaring at them from a distance, Peter shifted his gaze back to Twilight. “What do you say we stick together? I can be your umbrella while you show me around. I’m not good for much, but I can be a good meat shield.”
Slow to respond, Twilight’s eyes softened as she gazed upon the young man. “I’d like that. Maybe we could share theories on quantum physics and mechanics in my closet?” She straightened her glasses while straightening her posture, retrieving a diary from her purse before writing on its pages. “I’ve read that you excel at mathematics and physics, so I’d love to see your thesis on quantum chemistry and technology.” Pausing, the girl chuckled sheepishly. “That sounded better in my head. I’m sorry if it came off weird.”
“Don’t worry about it. Sure. That sounds fun. It’s not often I get to talk geek with someone and they actually understand,” Peter grinned as Twilight mirrored his action. However, he paused momentarily, blinking as a realization crept into the back of his mind. “Wait. Did you say closet?”
Twilight continued to write, shrugging nonchalantly. “Yes. I live there.”
“Oh, okay,” the young man lightly responded, nodding. Blinking, Peter’s jaw dropped while his complexion paled, reality striking his mind like a storm, “You live in a closet?!”
Doctor Octavius hummed happily as he stared intently into a microscope. “Fascinating. Your blood and genetics are incredible. I see high traces of radiation and regenerative qualities. From what I can summarize, you can heal from just about any injury or trauma, and most toxins would be ineffective against you.” He stood upright, retrieving a syringe from the nearest shelf before walking up to Peter. “I believe another sample is in order. I’d like to run more tests. With your consent, of course.”
Peter inhaled deeply and sighed, shrugging before rolling one of his sleeves up. “Sure thing, Doc.”
“Good. Now, try to relax, my boy,” Octavious murmured, furrowing his brow. Pausing to wipe the young man’s arm with a sanitized cloth, he pressed the syringe against his skin, but the needle bent, unable to penetrate the surface. Octavious stared at the broken needle with a widened gaze, lifting his goggles momentarily. “Amazing. The density of your skin is almost like that of steel. How have you kept this a secret from your doctor visits?”
Pausing, Peter glanced at his arm with a furrowed brow. “Sorry about that, Doc. I have to force myself to relax.”
Octavious grinned, warmly placing a hand over Peter’s shoulder. “It’s not relaxing if you have to force yourself. That’s counterproductive.” Once the older man retrieved a second syringe from the shelf, he held it over Peter’s arm and waited. “Let’s try again.”
Slow to respond, Peter closed his eyes and exhaled. His thoughts raced uncontrollably, making the simple act of relaxing impossible. His surroundings buzzed and echoed, as if the tiniest sounds could be heard. Gritting his teeth, Peter winced while a train roared from far outside, as if it was only inches away. Suddenly, a high-pitched squeal followed, causing bolts of pain to throb across his cranium.
Beads of sweat began to drip from his face as overstimulation became apparent, evident by the vein pulsating over his forehead. Fortunately, the sounds ceased before everything silenced, and Peter let a relieved sigh escape from his mouth while his muscles eased. Octavious managed to slide the needle into his arm, drawing blood before placing the syringe in a safe case. Just as he prepared a bandage, the doctor watched as the wound had already closed and healed entirely.
“Excellent, my boy. I’ll inform you of what I find next with this sample,” Octavious happily declared, pausing to peck away at the keyboard nearby. Once he turned, Peter could only exhale while rubbing a hand over his throbbing cranium. Sobering, Octavious quickly retrieved a bottle of water from across the room before offering it to his pupil. “Are you okay? I’ve noticed you have been rather taxed as of late. Are your extracurricular activities taking a toll?”
Shaking his head, Peter downed the contents of the bottle in a pair of gulps. “I’m not sure, Doc. Everything’s been fuzzy. All of my senses have been going into overdrive lately. It’s like when I first got my powers but tripled. I can literally feel everything.” Peter’s body twitched involuntarily as he alternated his gaze wildly, snapping to a halt. Once Octavious handed him another bottle of water, the young man consumed the liquid instantly and exhaled. “Did I say tripled? I think I meant quintupled.”
“It certainly might explain some of your agitation as of late. I noticed you bent a pair of tongs yesterday,” Octavious huffed, lowering the goggles back over his face before returning his attention to the microscope nearby. He glanced out of the corner of his eye, managing a smile. “I noticed you fixed them, but I have a keen eye for detail.”
Placing a hand over his face, Peter could only shake his head. “Some of it is this. Most of it’s just dealing with everything else. My social life sucks. Everyone else hates Spider-Man.” He pointed a thumb behind his position, aiming it at the locked door at the other end of the room. “Plus, there’s her. She’s been glaring at me nonstop since coming here.”
“Don’t mind Twilight, my boy. She reminds me of an old colleague. I chose her for a reason. The potential you both share is unmatched… should you give each other the benefit of the doubt,” Otto calmly declared, reaching out with a pair of scissors in hand. He snipped a piece of Peter’s hair from his head, placing it in a clear bag after struggling to free it from the surface. The older man nodded and grinned mischievously behind a dark gleam in his goggles. “Another sample to document. Science thanks you, Mister Parker.”
Bemused, Peter stared at his mentor with a twitching brow. “Glad at least one of us is optimistic, Doc. I wish you could share some of that hope with me.”
Octavious sobered, placing a hand over the young man’s shoulder. “Have faith, Peter. I know you are trying your best. What you are doing is using your gift to help mankind, whether it’s what you do as your alter-ego or Peter Parker. You will see the fruits of your labor soon enough.” Pausing, the older man straightened his goggles with a finger before nodding. “I believe it is nearly time that I talked with both of you, but it can wait until you are both fit to listen.”
“If you insist, Doc, but I won’t hold my breath,” Peter murmured, scratching the back of his head.
Octavious returned his attention to the microscope before straightening his posture. “Go home, Peter. I’ll continue studying your blood sample. Rest your nerves and stay hydrated. We will talk tomorrow. ”
Nodding, Peter stood from his seat. “Thanks, Doc. I’ll see you later.”
Disrobing his lab coat, the young man walked out of the room and placed it onto the nearest rack before exiting the building. As Octavious locked the door to his office, he returned his attention to the microscope containing Peter’s blood sample. Meanwhile, within the confines of her room, Twilight narrowed her gaze as she tightened a pair of knobs with a screwdriver on a small round device. A small purple dog with traces of green fur rested by her foot while she finished working on the device. Placing her screwdriver down, the girl closed the item, and it glowed in response, emitting a neon blue light from its violet, metallic surface as a star emblem materialized into existence at the center.
“The spectrometer is ready. I’ll be able to track electromagnetic signals with this,” she whispered, cupping the item in the palm of her hands gently. “It will lead me straight to the anomalies in the area.”
A pair of knocks were heard at the door, freeing the girl from her trance. “Come in!” she stated, smiling upon sharing a glance with Doctor Octavious. Her dog stirred to life before stretching, walking to the older man as its tail wagged. Twilight nodded, placing the item down momentarily. “I wanted to thank you again for the opportunity, Doctor Octavious.”
Otto folded his arms. “It’s my pleasure, Twilight. Your intellect is a welcomed addition.” He glanced to the side, furrowing his brow at the sight of a blanket and air mattress near the corner of the room. “Are you okay staying here? We can make accommodations and rent you a room.”
Twilight waved a hand dismissively and grinned. “That won’t be necessary. This is already an upgrade compared to my old closet. I appreciate the thought.” The dog panted happily, returning to the girl’s side, and Twilight smiled, nodding. “Spike’s grateful, too.”
Otto glanced to the side, growling under his breath. “I can’t believe that she put you in such a terrible living condition. Just what are you doing, Abacus?” he whispered, clearing his throat once Twilight glanced in his direction. “Is there a way I can convince you to stay and possibly transfer to Canterlot High? I’d love to make you my apprentice,” Octavious declared, leaning forward with a hopeful smile.
“With Parker?” she darkly whispered, prompting Otto to nod in response. The girl inhaled deeply before scoffing, shaking her head. “I’m sorry, Doctor Octavious, but I can’t bring myself to work with someone who has such little regard for those around him. My stay here is only temporary.”
Octavious let out a low sigh before managing a nod. “I urge you not to be so hasty, but I want you to know that I accept your decision. Parker may surprise you. I wouldn’t have chosen him to become my apprentice had I not seen his potential. Same with you. At least think it over for a day or two.” As the girl glanced to the side with a softened gaze, as if considering his words, Otto brought a hand to his chin. “What’s your intention, and where will you go?”
A gleam sparkled from the girl’s eyes as she took hold of the device on her table. “With my spectrometer, I’m going to find and contain the source of the electromagnetic anomalies spreading throughout the area. I have a few theories, one being that the Spider-Man is partially responsible.”
A bead of sweat trickled down the side of Otto’s face as he chuckled nervously, pausing to clear his throat. “I see.”
Oblivious, Twilight centered her gaze on the spectrometer and smiled widely. “I’m hoping the results will help secure my application for Everton and/or Oscorp.” Suddenly, Twilight’s eyes widened as a realization struck her mind like lightning to a rod. “I almost forgot that I have to finish my transfer and give Principal Cinch my documents.”
Otto’s smile faded as his expression softened. “Between the two, I’d recommend Everton. They’re quite the coveted independent program. Try to stay away from Oscorp if you can.” Just as the girl tilted her head to the side, holding a bewildered expression, Octavious cleared his throat. “Best of luck to you, Twilight. Just be careful when examining the unknown. Scientific curiosity is not worth the safety of others.” Lowering his head, Otto peeked over his goggles and allowed his brown eyes to surface briefly. “Give Abby my regards.”
The pair shared a nod before Octavious exited the room, retreating back into his office. Twilight returned her gaze to the spectrometer before sliding a thread through a small opening near the top. Once the task was complete, she placed the item around her neck, as if it were a pendant. Determined, Twilight eased Spike into her backpack, before leaving the building. Once she stepped outside, the spectrometer hummed to life and glowed intensely. Nodding, Twilight took hold of a few documents, sliding them into a folder before venturing forth.
The next day, school progressed as normal, and students consulted within the library, including Sunset and the others. Applejack sat back with her feet placed at the table, while everyone else sorted through an array of books. Fluttershy quietly watched while holding a small rabbit in her grasp. Meanwhile, Sunset paced in place, alternating her gaze between the ceiling and the ground.
“I’m telling you that some girl was snooping around the portal. I don’t know why, but as soon as I called out to her, she ran for the bus before I could get to her,” Sunset declared, furrowing her brow.
Fluttershy lifted her gaze, tilting her head to the side. “Do you think she came from Equestria?”
Sunset shook her head. “No. I would have noticed if the portal was actually opened. I’m pretty sure she was from here.”
Rarity huffed, brushing a hand through her hair. “Good! The last thing I need is another tussle with the forces of evil. The wear and tear on my wardrobe can’t bear another beating.”
“Still, there was a mysterious figure poking around the portal. Don’t you all want to know who is behind it?” Sunset questioned, holding out her hands to the side.
Pinkie nodded feverishly, raising a finger. “I bet it was a nighttime statue cleaner! Or a gardener.”
Rainbow Dash walked from around the corner with a book in hand, smirking. “No way. I totally know who it was. Think about it! Seeing as to how they got on a bus from the city and hop back on a bus heading to the city, I’ll bet they go to…”
“Crystal Prep,” everyone in the group blankly stated with the exception of Sunset Shimmer.
Rainbow Dash nodded, scoffing. “Yep. With the Friendship Games happening tomorrow, they’d totally prank us by defacing the Wonderbolt statue.”
Bewildered, Sunset held a widened gaze. “That seems like a bit much. Why would they take a bus just to do that?”
Applejack folded her arms. “Because Crystal Prep is our biggest rival?”
Rarity arched a brow. “Because that’s just what the students of Crystal Prep would do?”
Rolling her eyes, Rainbow Dash exhaled harshly. “And despite the fact that they beat us in everything… from soccer, tennis, golf, and whatever else,” she paused and held out the book in her hand to Sunset, revealing a page of the Canterlot High equine statue with a wig over its head, socks over its hooves, and a mismatch of clothing over its being. “They always have to gloat!”
Sunset stepped back before shrugging dismissively. “Seems silly to me.”
“Silly?!” the girls blurted out in unison, causing Sunset to stagger in place as they all stared intently in her direction.
Rainbow Dash placed a hand over her hip. “I bet you think the Friendship Games are silly, too?”
“I mean, it’s not like we’ll be dealing with the forces of magic this time,” Sunset stated, furrowing her brow.
Fluttershy placed a hand over Sunset’s shoulder. “No. We’ll be dealing with a school full of meanies,” she paused, sharing a glance with the girl, “Not everything has to be magical to be important.”
Sunset’s demeanor lightened as she chuckled sheepishly. “You’re right. I’m sorry. I know it’s a big deal.”
Rarity waved a hand while shaking her head. “That’s quite the understatement, darling. It’s taking the school a bit longer to revamp the field, after Spider-Man nearly destroyed it fighting that oversized brute.”
Sobering, she glanced off to the side. “I’m just surprised about this rivalry. Isn’t the whole idea of the Friendship Games for our schools to come together and get along?”
“Pretty hard to get along with someone who beats you at everything and rubs it in your face,” Applejack mumbled, holding a bemused glare.
Rainbow Dash smirked. “Not anymore! Things are going to be different! Flash Thompson’s going to be leading the boy’s team to victory! Dude was a decorated champ back at his old school!” The girl smugly grinned, flexing her arm. “Plus, I have a plan myself! We’re going to recruit the best and–!”
“That’s stupid!” a voice boasted from behind their positions. Everyone glanced in its direction, spotting Peter sitting at a table with Trixie, Aria, and Ditzy. The young man shook his head furiously while crossing his arms. “You can forget it!”
Slack-jawed, Trixie pointed a finger at him. “What do you mean?! The Friendship Games are important to us! Do you really want Crystal Prep to beat us again?!”
“You didn’t say anything about those guys!” Peter barked, glancing to the side.
Aria smirked, resting her chin in the palm of her hand as she watched the pair. “I’m surprised. I didn’t think you had this in you. I kinda like it.”
Sunset walked over the table with a brow raised. “What’s going on?”
“Oh! Excellent timing, Sunset!” Trixie huffed, pointing her finger at Peter. “This cretin says he refuses to participate in the Friendship Games!” She nodded, raising a hand dramatically. “You should show your school spirit and participate!”
Peter folded his arms, tapping a finger impatiently. “Oh, sure! Let me go out and try my best for a school that activately hates me to beat another school that hates me even more than they do.” Inhaling deeply before sighing, the young man scowled. “I used to go to Crystal Prep, and they suck just as much.”
Ditzy tilted her head to the side. “You went to Crystal Prep?”
“Just for a semester before I transferred here,” Peter stated, pausing once the entire library grew silent. He peeked up, noticing every student glaring in his direction. Most began to whisper while others scowled. Exhaling, Peter threw up his hands in a defeated manner before grabbing his backpack. “On that note, I’m out of here. I’ll watch your stupid games, but I’m not participating.”
Rainbow Dash watched as Peter hurried out of the library before sharing a glance with her friends. “That guy went to Crystal Prep? Huh. That explains a lot.”
Fluttershy walked up to Rainbow Dash with a firm gaze. “Try to be nice. It sounds like he was picked on a lot there, and you haven’t been nice to him either.”
Sunset bit down on her lip. “Peter, wait!” She sped after the young man, ignoring the glares the other students gave. Soon enough, Sunset reached the outside and spotted Peter down the hallway. He paused, glancing at the girl from the corner of his eye, and Sunset eventually slowed to a halt once they were a few feet apart. “Are you okay?”
Peter simply shrugged. “It’s no big deal. I haven’t been here long enough to care.”
Pausing, Sunset glanced to the side while rubbing her forearm. “We should talk. I have questions, and I know you have some as well.” She pointed a thumb behind her position. “After school over lunch? My treat.”
Slow to respond, Peter managed to nod. “Sure. Just text me.”
Sunset waved as the young man coldly walked off, wincing inwardly once he was out of hearing range. “Please don’t screw this up.”
To Be Continued…
What happened????
If they were on such good terms on the start then what made it change???😟
so he knows he is Spider-man.
thats not good
Dang your quick on these updates, respect the work ethic bro.
Oh this is going to be going BADLY for everyone involved.
Ah crap, Doc Ock is going to start the equivalent of the clone saga isn’t he. I hope Sunset will open a bit more up to Peter as she obviously cares for him. Plus it would help if he would return the favor and let her into his secret as well.
I mean, sure, Aria's doesn't have the moral high-ground, considering what she and her sisters were doing, but she's also not exactly wrong. Hopefully Sunshim and Pete can talk things out.
Looks like Sunset is finally going to have her talk with Peter. Hope it goes well. It's going to sound pretty weird and unbelievable confessing the truth to Peter that she is a magical unicorn pony in a teenaged human body, if she does tell him that is. But given the recent hijinks of a seemly nerdy and shy teenager who's actually Spider-Man has turned out, Peter's side would probably be taken just the same. If Peter does take Sunset's secret seriously, since she really wants Peter to trust her and thinks that he deserves better than how he was treated lately, perhaps it would be fair for him to trust her with his secret. Not sure if he will, but I'll wait and see how this turns out.
Pretty ironic that it took Aria giving Sunset a wake up call to make her realise that maybe she's been trying to sort this out the wrong way when both of them, a siren and a unicorn pony, are meant to not like each other. Sure Aria may not hate Sunset for what happened at the Battle of the Bands, that all being Adagio's own fault to begin with, but she doesn't have to like her. And while Sunset is willing to give Aria a chance, that doesn't mean she has to tolerate her snarky attitude. Hearing both sides, I think they have found fair and equal footing between them for now.
So Twilight hasn't actually transferred to Canterlot High sooner in this reality and is still technically a Crystal Prep student. She has just rather moved to a better lab location other than her closet she's living in with working with Octavius as a perfect opportunity for her. And she's completed her spectrometer which will contain or rather steal any source of magic it detects, which includes the Rainboom's magic and the magic from the statue portal.
And Octavius nows knows what she's doing and that she's trying to discover who Spider-Man is which he already knows the answer to. But it is not Otto's place to tell since he respects Peter's trust and privacy to not spill the beans. If only Otto could steer Twilight in the right direction of using her knowledge and gift of science for the good of humanity rather than her own needs sooner than later before she starts meddling with forces beyond her understanding. Plus it sounds like he has some sort of history with Abacus Cinch as well.
Well... Peter did have a thing for horses and ponies when he was a kid as "Marvel's Spider-Man" (2018) has shown, so there's hope yet. Just pray Sunset doesn't take that in a weird literal sense.
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I really hope Doc Ock stays good. I don't want to see a nice man turn to evil again. Also I really hope Sci-Twi gets that stick out of her ass. She is really venomous towards Peter and it's not good. Also. I hope Peter does participate in the Friendship games cuz I do want to see the face off between Sci-Twi and Peter
Sigh that makes sense, even if it wasn’t crystal prep, Peter Parker would never do sports.
He’s too overly cautious to enjoy himself even though he thinks about it too much
He refused in ultimate Spider-Man
And changed his mind about football in spectacular Spider-Man
And why would he say that he was from that school? He is trying to add more bad rep??
I’m suprised they didn’t get kicked out of the library
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Two words: Abacus Cinch.
Man I worry for Peter he going to explode one day, and slug Flash Thompson, no he won't kill him he hold back enough not to, but he leave him out cold or with a cracked haw and then explode again when he punished.
Stating how Jocks like Flash get away with everything, and how he come to hate the dam school and all.
Heck wouldn't be surprise he also quits being Spider man maybe do it public if they all want him gone so be it.
Then everyone has to deal withthe villains popping up causing so much mayhem.
Be poetic justice.
Not in this saga but later on.
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im afraid of that as well
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Yeah, Spiderman always had a huge amount of bad luck, and High School was the worst.
Oh speaking of the worst so much for a school of Friendship! Treating Peter they they are even some of the Rainbooms.
Hope that pointed out to them.
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will he soon snap?
Imagine if someone said this to crystal prep student or twilight
“Preppies?! Oh I hate you guys always on deck with your docksiders, while us Townies are scrubbing the bilge!”
Where’s microchips?
LET'S GO!!!!! HYPE!!!!!!!!!!!
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It's a spectrometer. The thing that's designed to pick up certain wavelengths of electromagnetic radiation. And he has Radioactive blood so....yeah. Magic just happens to give off a signal it can pick up. That doesn't mean it's the ONLY thing it picks up.
It's understandable that Aria is upset over what happened with her, but as pointed out, it's her own fault for trying to take over the school. True none of the others checked on her after, but there really wasn't too much obligation since Sunset was actively bothered by what she's become, and the Sirens probably didn't have immediate remorse. Good on Peter for having checked up on them.
Also, nice to see more of Peter and Twilight, along with their past. But this chapter, and story in general, reminds me of why I was never interested in the EG version of Twilight. She just feels too different from the main counterpart, who while herself can be similar, probably wouldn't be as bad. Is it supposed to show what Twilight would have been like without friends or something? Feels like a stretch since she's always been strong willed without them. The EG movies did her dirty IMO.
Also, seems like Peter and Sunset may go on a somewhat date with one another. Time to see where that goes.
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I get where you are coming from, but we do have to remember that OG Twilight was stuck in her own head, focused solely on her studies, and was a bit of a snob before she made friends. If anything, that's exactly why Celestia sent her to Equestria in the first place. Let's call it multiverse theory. Sci Twi (EQG) was just a different character due to circumstances (plus, she's younger and still a teenager. There's still a lot of growth to be had there). It's no different with the Spider-Men (Tobey, Andrew, and Tom). They are all Peter Parker, but there are definitely differences between them.
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That is a good point, it still bothers me a bit, multiverse theory or not. I mean it’s not your story, just what you’re working with. But I’m confident that won’t limit how well you portray these characters.
Glad to see peter somewhat standing up for himself, u should have him be more assertive especially towards sci twilight who by the way seem to hate him for something really petty.
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Considering how little things have bothered her before like that sibling supreme thing of course she’s petty
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No doubt put she just needs to accept the fact that there are people in the world who are better and smarter than her, that’s the real world for ya.
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Yeah microchips beat her in the vote for most likely to discover cold fusion in the school yearbook after all
Where is microchips?
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Thanks for the comment. Curious. Which romance hooks do you find irritating and why?
grate work so fare
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Well I found the sweetie Belle hook a little irritating it made Peter Parker look like interested in kids which could make fans ragequit
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That's fair. Although I have not touched on the Crusaders' ages, I say they are 14 in this verse while Peter is 15 and most of the main 7 are 16.
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Well now that chrysalis invented cloning it’s very possible
Also hope for a situation like this
If Fluttershy becomes morbius or Chat from Marvel Adventures
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I read the original series and I have to say THIS one probably BLOWS that one out of the water! It's largely better written in my opinion, Peter is a little more flushed out, his relationships are a bit more interesting (I actually like him better with Sunset than Twilight to be honest), and plus I liked the idea that this reality and the S&M reality have crossed over with the Princess Twilight for THIS story being the one from S&M (it was actually mentioned that THIS Sunset may not be the one from THAT universe; care to explain?) I admit so many knowing about Peter being Spider-Man is a little difficult to accept, but you manage to make it so that even with there being a few more people to support him, Peter STILL has it tough, particularly with J.J.J. and Diamond bad-mouthing him and the Rainbooms and others not fully trusting him except for Sunset (though it seems Fluttershy may be developing a crush on him as Spider-Man, which I'm sure will be cute.)
BTW, you kind of hinted that the Mane Six also got with some other Marvel Universe characters (like Spike with Wasp and Fluttershy with WOLVERINE of all people.) Do you plan on doing that here? If so, I honestly think an interesting development would be for Rarity to fall for Robbie Reyes, the Ghost Rider. Robbie coukd be a new kid at CHS, having moved from LA due to a program made after the Friendship Games by Celestia, Luna and the new Principal Cadence to help kids who weren't able to finish a high school education for what ever reason, as many jobs require at LEAST a high school degree (I know, I've looked.) He could actually befriend Peter and the Loser Brigade and even make friends with the Rainbooms. One in particular. Robbie is actually a very young giving and generous individual, giving up a lot of his future for his brother's own, which is probably something Rarity would be more than willing to do for Sweetie Belle if the need arose. I could see her admiring this greatly and maybe aiding Robbie with taking care of Gabe and she sees him as a darling, leading to her and Robbie growing closer and eventually start a relationship. It could be complicated by Robbie's "other half" and the group's distrust of Ghost Rider (Peter included), but he and Robbie could work together to stop certain criminals and come to trust each other with them becoming unlikely allies. Depending on what you plan to do with Kingpin, perhaps there is a contest between lesser crime bosses he controls (Sombra, Tempest, the Storm King, Grogan, Tirek) and they try to despose of the Ghost Rider once he shows up in THEIR neck of the woods, with the prize being a large sum of money and a place eby his side. Just a thought. You should REALLY follow the ideas and the artwork of edCOM02. He has SO many awesome ideas that I'm sure he'd let you use if you asked and gave him slight credit for.
I can hardly wait to see what you have in store for THIS story either. Twilight hating Peter is a VERY interesting development and could possibly be a drive in her capturing and unleashing the magic, in order to prove she's better than him at something. Plus, Octavius KNOWS about Peter being Spider-Man here. He's supportive now, but what could happen once he turns into you-know-who!? That would DEFINITELY put Peter's life into a tailspin. We all remember the mess Otto caused knowing Peter's identity. And of course, Peter and Sunset. I would LOVE to see those two get together and see how far their relationship will go.
Hope to see a new chapter here very, very soon and to see more come sooner in the future. Take your time if need be though. I know first-hand life gets in the way a LOT and doesn't make it easy for people like us. If you want, I could aid as a proofreader. It would certainly give me more experience and I could help a series I really like to be written and posted for others faster. Just an offer.
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Which means that Sweetie Belle has a fair chance just like the other girls. But she has a lot of competition, so she must hold out.
so whats next
Hey man, don't tell me you're letting the liberal trolls get to you again? It's been nearly 20 days since the last chapter was posted. When will the next one be posted?
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Huh? Haha, no. I work two jobs, and the past three weeks, I have been booked to work summer camp with my autistic students. My days have just been super busy and I'm usually super drained by the time I get home. Even on the weekend, I'm working my other job. So it's just a matter of me being lazy and slow to type. My schedule is finally going to lighten up after this week, since summer camp will be over and I'll just be working one job for a month and a half.
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Awesome! Can't wait!
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Ok. Sorry about that. Assumed the worst. Glad to hear your keeping on keeping on.
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At least I'm happy that it hasn't been canceled or gone on hiatus HxH style
take your time no rush
Look dude I know you have a a job, but I need to know how the stories going man, at the very least upload one chapter
love your work
Interesting story, loved the spider-mane ones
all though I haven’t read the other reality one yet with chrysalis I’m chargeI can’t wait to see more as I am enjoying this!Fantastic news! MetalJrock has just created a TV Tropes page for this series!
Here it is!
This series is really cool! Keep up the good work dude!
Over two months since the recent chapter and nothing yet.
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I've heard and the people have spoken. Luckily, I'm finished with business and personal matters. The story resumes this week!
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That’s Pretty cool, so do you think we could see Lyra being funny again like in the first story?
Also for advice muffins often hangs out with the ridiculously buff softie bulk biceps so maybe he can be a friend too?
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YAY!
I'm shaking in anticipation dude please tell me it's soon