Rainbow Dash has been protecting the city of Manehatten as a hero for some time, but her temporary job seemingly takes a turn when her biological impulses decide to enter the playing field. Surely she can handle a little heat...right?
Unfff, yup, this payoff is paying off big time. Loved everything in Chapter 3. Very evocative, readable prose, which is what's needed for cloppy stories.
I also really appreciate the "pony-ness" of the fic. Always surprises (/depresses) me how familiar I've become with the tropes of horny pony porn, from the heat to the wingboners to the teats to the semi-bestial scents and sounds to the breeding... It's unique fics like this that keep me coming back to this universe long after I would've abandoned others.
If I have one small complaint, it's that I wish the change in RD's attitude between chapters 3&4 was a bit less dramatic. I personally prefer a slow, self-aware descent into depravity to an immediate mindbreak. That's probably a "different strokes for different folks"-type deal though... and the sex was damn hot besides.
This was fantastic~ I love to see Rainbow dash embracing the whore that see truly was all along~ I hope that Flux gets to corrupt her further in the next chapters~
11249540 I kinda hope that you don't do that, I like to imagine what could happen in the next chapters before they are released, Maybe RD is saved somehow, maybe she helps Flux corrupt her other friends, I hope that you also gets tons of fanart for this story too~
The Anti-Villain-Victory-Department watches slowly and with interest... Be careful with your next move, Mr Flux, lest we intervene... Although the horny police division might make more sense intervening here. Although, to be honest, seeing Rainbow Dash's ego being eradicated in a unique way, has made us... Curious to see where this goes. Who knows, perhaps this may become a blossoming relationship.
11250389 I honestly like the fact it gets romantic..... She might be a tomboy mare that needs putting into place.... But if you really liked or loved her before mind washing her then who would skip such opportunity
11250490 Yeah that “geez” was exclamatory, the romantic vibe made it a lot hotter as the antoganist can’t even help to fall for Rainbow after mind-washing her.
It really is the hottest clopfic I've seen recently, and seems that poor Rainbow's gonna fall even deeper in the next chapters. If FimTale (local FF equivalent of CHN Brony community) has a clopfic section I'd probably up for a translation role, though I've paused on premitted translation of Fine Print for a gig in a subtitle studio to earn some pocket bucks to buy pony arts. Efforts for translating that lengthy novel for nothing than some viewer's compliments's just too ascetic as a student in uni, the amateur studio only assign jobs once a month or so but at least it pays for a bit...
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chapter 7 is calling your name
when it eventually comes outOh boy it just got even better
Omg this was such a good read, right in the fetishes.... I really neeed fic like this for a long while.... I love it!
The details and how Flux played with her I'm definitely going to read it again if I'm in a need of clopfic like that
I do love me a good "bad" ending even though this is not an end owo
Unfff, yup, this payoff is paying off big time. Loved everything in Chapter 3. Very evocative, readable prose, which is what's needed for cloppy stories.
I also really appreciate the "pony-ness" of the fic. Always surprises (/depresses) me how familiar I've become with the tropes of horny pony porn, from the heat to the wingboners to the teats to the semi-bestial scents and sounds to the breeding... It's unique fics like this that keep me coming back to this universe long after I would've abandoned others.
If I have one small complaint, it's that I wish the change in RD's attitude between chapters 3&4 was a bit less dramatic. I personally prefer a slow, self-aware descent into depravity to an immediate mindbreak. That's probably a "different strokes for different folks"-type deal though... and the sex was damn hot besides.
Holy fuck you got something amazing here! I hope Dash ends up carrying his foal
What if I do something quirky and just publish the entire story tomorrow or the day after
40,000+ more words of fun stuffs
Mayhaps
Still very fun to read keep it up
This was fantastic~ I love to see Rainbow dash embracing the whore that see truly was all along~ I hope that Flux gets to corrupt her further in the next chapters~
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I kinda hope that you don't do that, I like to imagine what could happen in the next chapters before they are released, Maybe RD is saved somehow, maybe she helps Flux corrupt her other friends, I hope that you also gets tons of fanart for this story too~
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But then i have to wait more and woke up exited to see what was next.
I hope he tames Dashie into a subservient wife-servant that will give birth to foals for the rest of her life.
The Anti-Villain-Victory-Department watches slowly and with interest... Be careful with your next move, Mr Flux, lest we intervene... Although the horny police division might make more sense intervening here. Although, to be honest, seeing Rainbow Dash's ego being eradicated in a unique way, has made us... Curious to see where this goes. Who knows, perhaps this may become a blossoming relationship.
Anyways, good story, you have garnered our watch.
Hmm...I wonder if you're going to eventually have Rainbow Dash become the villain's evil queen/wife. That would be a fun twist.
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*MIND CONTROLLED wife-servant
I'm very curious to see where this story goes. The clop is well written which is not always the case with such stories.
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I honestly like the fact it gets romantic..... She might be a tomboy mare that needs putting into place.... But if you really liked or loved her before mind washing her then who would skip such opportunity
11250490
Yeah that “geez” was exclamatory, the romantic vibe made it a lot hotter as the antoganist can’t even help to fall for Rainbow after mind-washing her.
It really is the hottest clopfic I've seen recently, and seems that poor Rainbow's gonna fall even deeper in the next chapters.
If FimTale (local FF equivalent of CHN Brony community) has a clopfic section I'd probably up for a translation role, though I've paused on premitted translation of Fine Print for a gig in a subtitle studio to earn some pocket bucks to buy pony arts. Efforts for translating that lengthy novel for nothing than some viewer's compliments's just too ascetic as a student in uni, the amateur studio only assign jobs once a month or so but at least it pays for a bit...