your not going to cancel this are you?

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I feel more committed to this one, because I dont feel obligated to keep to some sort of schedule.

interesting for sure
cant wait for more.

You consistently spelled Shining Armor's name wrong throughout this entire fic. How do you mess up that badly?

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British spelling has it with a u in as armour, so I’m sorry for where I grew up, but I shan’t be changing that spelling.

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You misunderstand. I did not say you were spelling the word armor wrong I said you were spelling Shining Armor's name wrong.
Say you had a woman named Krystal instead of Cristal. Yes, the spelling of her name seems stupid but if that's what her legal docs say it is then that's what it is.
Semantics is really important for people's names.

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I appreciate the point however names are localised, and over here he is Shining Armour, so again it works as it is and I shan't change it.

I feel that here Nightmare Moon was strongly inspired by the actions of the "headless horseman"

By the way, comparing this story with the previous one, I can say that I like the remake of the first chapter. This chapter seems to be better developed in terms of storytelling.

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It's almost as if being in university improves your writing ability . /s