This is Twilight's chance to meet a man from another universe
Spelling is horrible. There's something called spell check, use it. Sentences are poorly constructed, and there is too much repitition of the same words, be creative. Also, Mary Sue much?
Spelling is horrible. There's something called spell check, use it. Sentences are poorly constructed, and there is too much repitition of the same words, be creative. Also, Mary Sue much?