Forbidden Fruit -
By NocturneD
Note: Hello and all to the story of Forbidden Fruit. I do want to say to start off it was an honor working on it and appreciate everyone's kind words and constructive criticism. It got its own little following but let's be honest, it's another one of THOSE stories about thinking you were in love but when it turns out you are not. I would like to thank Popoman100 for taking the time and making this into an audio reading. With the help of LuffyDuffy7817 and EdgeWoodBlake providing the voices. So here it is if you want to just sit back and listen, also visit their youtube channels too for some awesome videos!
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All of you see me as miss perfect. I represent true love. I have little faults. I was flawless in my wedding dress walking down the aisle to marry my true love. Shining Armor; my knight in shining armor. My love. The special pony who was perfect for me. My special day was almost ruined thanks to the queen of the changelings. But thanks to Twilight Sparkle and her friends, we all prevailed in the end. The wedding went as followed and the reception was great. It was everything that I hoped for when I was a little filly. The wedding night went as expected, my love and I expressed our love for each other and it all seemed like it was going fine the next few months...
Until I went to Ponyville to visit Twilight Sparkle and her friends for a week. Shining Armor could not come at the time because of guard duty. Ponyville was pretty much a quiet little town. Not too many of those around anymore thanks to job demands and urban renewals. Do not get me wrong I support every pony working to support their family, but seeing Ponyville for what it was. It looked peaceful. Almost like a small town that time forgot.
Twilight Sparkle and I as usual did our little dance to greet each other. Oh how much fun it was. Twilight showed me around starting with her library. The book selection was amazing, she has a lot of promise of becoming a librarian in the future. Maybe she could even manage the castle's someday? We went to see Rarity; the fashion pony. She is so frantic with trying to please me. Guess she wants to mingle with the high society. Pinkie Pie gave me a huge celebration that night to welcome me. I love her just to bits. Then there is Fluttershy who is just a doll. Her animal friends I adore. Rainbow Dash was not big on parties that distracted her from her practice sessions. I promised her tickets to the next Wonderbolts if she was interested in going with me as for some reason Shining Armor does not fancy them. With an obvious yes it was decided. Then there is Applejack, the last honest pony in Equestria. Surely a good pony to know and be friends with.
My troubles started I guess you could say the first night I came here. The party was being held at the Sweet Apple Acre farm and almost every pony from Ponyville was there. There was dancing. Eating wonderful pies. And most of all drinking this blessed apple cider. I love it.
One mug of cider later...
I was dancing with Pinkie. She tore the dance floor like a mad pony. Her moves were electrifying. Dash joined in and it was explosive. I just can't get enough of this cider.
Another mug later...
I decided to walk outside to see more of the party. There I noticed a red stallion fiddling around with some farm contraption. Sorry I don't know much about farming so whatever it was I'm sure it was vital to the Apple family. I sat down not to far from the barn to get away from the party and just enjoy the night sky that Luna blessed us with. The red stallion finished with the machine and noticed me sitting by myself sipping my cider. I must have had two already. Twilight and the others tried to coax me back in and kept me company for a bit, then a distraction or two later they would be back inside. Something about Pinkie Pie being blind folded and running around holding a sharp object to pin on something.
He asked if I was lost. I just giggled and shook my head then said I was just getting some fresh air. He introduced himself as Big Mac. Well the Big part of his name holds up pretty well. He was a tall stallion, clearly got Shining Armor beat. He walked around my proximity for a bit putting things in different spots. At first I tried to watch the constellations but the sound of metal clanking , I could not concentrate. I looked at him, he looked back and apologized. I just laughed and told him he was not doing anything wrong. Then I asked him why he was not inside either. He just said there was still some work to do and did not want to deal with it earlier the next day. Pretty acceptable I admit.
Was not too long until he came back with a mug of apple cider for himself. I was almost out myself and wanted to fetch another. But I felt like talking. Big Mac was truly a remarkable pony with being very helpful and loyal to his family business. He explained what he does and what his responsibilities are. Normally I was never interested in businesses like I said before despite me having a foal sitting service back then. Why did I quit that you might ask? The foals themselves, guess I grew up along with them. I noticed Big Mac had a different brand of cider than I did. He told me he grabbed a mug of the alcoholic cider. I was intrigued. I had no idea they made cider with alcohol in it. I asked if I could have a sip, he warned me that it had a different taste and had an extra kick to it. What could possible happen? I had champaign at the wedding. I took a sip and boy was it strong. It tasted interesting...
I went back to the serving table and asked Applejack for a mug of the alcoholic cider. She commented saying I should kick it up an extra notch. Maybe if I drink more of it I will get a better taste. I went back to Big Mac who still sat there. We continued our conversation into the hours. I'm not sure if this was the cider talking but, Big Mac was pretty handsome. Wait... no I guess he looked handsome before. All big... Had big muscles. Well toned flank... His freckles were cute. He talked like a true gentle colt, even acted like one. Gave me the best seat outside the barn, nothing more than a hay stack but... meh. I was in a bubbly mood.
Wait...
Wait...
How many ciders did I have?
One... two...
Wait does that count the ones from earlier?
Three... four...
I don't know why but whatever Big Mac said was just funny to me. I kept pressing on his cutie mark like it was a button. I laughed harder. He just chuckled and rolled his eyes. He excused himself to go back to work. I told him to stay but insisted that he go. Oh no... that big beef cake is not getting away from me... I tracked him down in another barn where there was a lot of hay. Found him up in the rafters moving hay around. I groggily climbed up the ladder and almost lost my footing. The ladder fell to the floor and I was hanging onto the edge. Big Mac pulled me up and asked if I was okay. I just threw my arms around him and told him he was my knight in shining armor for helping me. I planted a big kiss on his lips. He backed away. I knew he was shy and told him he did not have to be. Come on... Give Cadance some loving... I remembered I did not give him my name and told him not to worry about it. He asked if I had a boyfriend, I just told him that my boyfriend was a big stick in the mud and thought about getting back at him. I knew it was the cider talking. I asked if he had a girlfriend, he said sort of and was not sure about it but wished to move it further. I complemented him more and saw him blush. What the cider made me say... I don't wish to repeat them even if I could remember some of them.
Then the big differences between Big Mac and Shining Armor came into play. A lot of similarities happened like laying me down gently on my stomach and working me slowly. Sizing me up and taking me finally. Big Mac lived up to his name and I moaned like a drunken whore and begged for more. More and more. Told him to do whatever he wanted, my body was his. His sculpted body was perfect. After what would have felt like hours, we both fell down in the hay. My hair was a mess, I was breathing heavily. Big Mac just lied there sleeping. Big guy was so exhausted. So was I... That was my mistake of sleeping right there next to him.
Before I knew it, water thrown on us. Big Mac and I scurried to our feet and found Applejack with a bucket and equipped with a mad face. Twilight was behind her with her hoofs over her mouth not sure what to think of the situation. The rest of her friends had their mouths open. My heart skipped a beat. I looked at Big Mac who looked at me then scratched his head.
"WHAT IN TARNATION HAPPEN HERE?" Applejack shouted then tossed the bucket to her side. "BIG MAC WHAT DID YOU DO?"
"I... Uh..." Big Mac stopped just as soon as Apple Jack shoved her face into his demanding answers.
"How could you Cadance?" Twilight muttered once, this time she shouted it and cried, "HOW COULD YOU?!"
"Wait... Cadance as is... Princess Cadance?" Big Mac blinked. "The princess Cadance of the royal wedding a few months ago?"
"Twil...Twilight. Applejack! I can explain!" I tried my best to explain but, it was no use. I was a bit drunk and hit on Big Mac. One thing led to another and now I'm confronted by my sister in law with her friends. The smell of sweat and sex was still in the air.
What would happen after that party. Twilight Sparkle lost faith in me, not sure if she should run and go tell her brother that I betrayed him. But she was sure as hell mad at Big Mac saying that he took advantage of me no matter how much I tried to explain. She even threw out all my luggage from her library and told me to go find a motel. Applejack was mad at me too, calling me a hussie saying if I could not keep my end of the promise then she would have never helped at my wedding. Twilight and Jack got into a huge verbal fight and were not speaking with each other. The others. Rainbow Dash flew away but not before hearing from that she took pictures. Pinkie said that the party was still fun, but looked at me funny saying that I was the only thing that went wrong. Rarity went on and told all of her mare friends. Fluttershy... said nothing. Maybe it was for the better. The whole town whisper as I walk past them. Big Mac had his fair share of judgment, but to be fair he did not even know who I was. He treated me like a lady and it felt great.. but I ruined his life too... He would get hissed at and yelled at for ruining a fairy tale marriage. Would not be long until Shining Armor hears about this. He can get mad at times but at this level I do not know what he could do.
I was so dead... I betrayed my husband and had no reason to do so. Big Mac was a nice pony and I hope nothing ever happens to him. I'm too scared to even go back home to our house. I just can not face Shining Armor. I took the promise and threw it all away for some stupid cider. Now I do not even want to look at the stuff.
I remember hearing a story. Was called Genesis I believe where a male pony was tempted by female pony with an apple... How fitting...
Was tasting the forbidden fruit worth it?
I actually would like to start off saying is to thank you all for reading . This story is not perfect but it is one of my better known stories from fanfiction.net where I go under the name NocturneD. It's already 18 chapters long and already has an audio reading by Popoman100 on youtube of the first three chapters. This story might not be for everyone but serves as more of a what-if things are not as great as they seem. Plus, I'm very new to Fimfiction after being on Fanfiction.net for over ten to fifteen years and trying to get the hang of things. Wondering if this is the right way I'm even doing things.
Like I said, this story is not for everyone and I'm glad you all took the time to read it.
sounds good I will read later!
Wait a minute. This is not the clop fic I was promised. WHERE IS MY APPLEJACK FUCKING A TREE PORN?! Anyway, nice story. But you use the characters full names too often.
Twilight Sparkle was doing her Twilight Sparkle things that Twilight Sparkle usually did. Twilight Sparkle studied hard for her test which Twilight Sparkle was about to take because Twilight Sparkle.
Kinda distracting.
Yes! You finally posted this to fimfiction.
I followed this on fanfic, I really really loved it. How many more chapters are left now?
1279421 well actually the sex stuff is implied more rather than done, if it was full of it then i would have to increase the rating.
So you've uploaded this here now. I love this story and others like "The Vanishing Star" and "Too Good To Be True" so I really hope you upload them here too.
I'd like to see where this goes...
This story is Carnage approved.
1279785 okay fair enough I really appreciate the criticism. But you really have to read the rest, along with Original Sin which is supposed to be the side story to get the whole picture here. As for Big Mac, I don't think he was in the wedding unless I could not see him so, maybe he did not know because he probably did not go as that gave me the idea he did not know her plus he was not really doing anything at the party except still doing work. As for quitting past chapter 2, its your call and I will respect it. But you're missing a lot more if you don't read Original Sin which is supposed to be Shining Armor's point of view through the whole matter. Him quitting on her, naive yes but understandable that he wants to be ticked on the situation.
Oh i remember this! I enjoyed this story a lot. Still don't know how most people will take some... um... particular elements of this story, but those don't interfere with what mattters in this story.
1279785 Well spoilers but
It seems Cadance used her love spell on SA from the start and made him fall in love with him, even so far as to make him break up with his girlfriend and become a guard just for her. He ends up sleeping with Rarity and cements the divorce. Twilight quits being Celestia's student and she seems to hate Ponyville and her friends.
Personally I never saw the charm on Big Mac. He is pretty dull to me. And to give him all this characterization... Might as a well be an OC.
1281551 personally i found him dull as well but come on Big Mac has atleast had one fanfic with every mare in the series.
and please don't post spoilers, thank you.
1281959 Well it was for him, since he seemed to want to know... Sorry.
1281992 oh i know, and i'm glad someone is willing to defend this even if its probably not in your taste or not. thanks for replying. i got original sin coming out soon, it just needs to be approved.
Have to say, this is shaping up to be a harrowing tale of lust and remorse. I'm curious as to where it will be headed in the future.
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Ahh, a nice and sad tale you have going on my friend. Now what we need now is to end by Shining Armor being "responsable" and call off his marriage and Cadance is left with a "reminder" as a result from her one-night-stand unionship (if you know what i mean )
:......What? We can't have all sad stories endied with all "fluffiness and happiness" you know, we need something ended with a depressing ending. . Either way, I can't wait to see how you'll deliever on this story man. Best regards
Excuse me. I must pick my jaw up off the floor...
I'm waiting for mac to gobfull out japanese and be all I've brought dishonor on the family then kill himself
Geez Mac, I know the number of Princesses has been increasing lately, but it's not like there are so many of them that it's hard to keep track of which alicorn is which!
Poor Big Mac. Spends all his time working, even during the party, and the ONE time a drunk babe stumbles out and hits on him he ends up wrecking a marriage and becoming a local pariah. Bummers.