- Member Since 16th Jan, 2020
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Nagiman
Clop writer involving pretty much anal as my favortie topic, but enjoy writing other things as well. I do not Take Requests, Comissions are rare. This is my hobby in spare time.
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I'd maybe even be into most of these fetishes, but seriously, Yona? She's like, the worst Young Six.
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She's cute, tho.
I'm not the fan of most of the fetishes here and especially not Yona being the MC, but the WS part was well-made. Welcome back, dude!
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I enjoy all the female young six, each being different in a unique way when it comes to working with them. Yona seems the most gullible or likely to do something extreme without properly thinking about the effects of what she's doing. Ocellus would be the opposite with Smolder being ahead of Yona and Silver being ahead of her. I do understand everyone has their own taste though when it comes to characters and fetishes overall. I tend to go with the heavy extreme end of making sure that if you're going deep, you're going in wild ride, though I do like doing the lighter side as well from time to time.
I also know that my most viewed and faved stories are my princess works as well, but I'm not one to keep riding that one trick pony until the end and not hit more audiences with chances to see their favorite character or maybe a situation. As long as you gave the story a read though, I'm glad that you did, and if you didn't fully read it as well and only got part way through I'm happy you read part of it.
I do like taking time to read and respond to comments on my works as it can help me see what I haven't done in a while, what characters others may want to see or see return for another bit as well. It is a giant balancing act for me as a writer after all. So thank you for taking the time to comment. 👍
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I know not everyone will enjoy Yona from the Young Six, but she is certainly one of my favorites in design for a big thicc girl, along with using that she doesn't seem the brightest of them either allowing for some manipulation as seen in the story itself. There is also the fact that there isn't much clop art or stories about her either so it feels right adding to that pool to choose from.
I am glad that you enjoyed something out of the story even if a small fraction of it. Seeing a comment with it allows for me to make decisions on future stories as well, take inspiration from my works at parts that people thought were great and avoid more terribly written ones. Could you go into more detail as to why you enjoyed the WS sections? As I've had an idea brewing for more of a just a WS style story without all the scat and additional things, but haven't figured out what would make it fully great. My latest view of derpi from Selenophile got me thinking of doing something with Gabby that wasn't as fully of bondage stuff on for WS, but the idea is planted as I think of stuff to do in general.
I do hope that you enjoy giving the story a future re-read at some point or share it around with those you think may enjoy it themselves. Always helps getting those Thumbs ups, comments, and views. I also try to blend in more tame NSFW with my extreme stuff so everyone can come to the dinner table and pick something they truly enjoy instead of being told I don't serve that. Thank you again for reading, and hopefully you will expand on what you like about the parts you did enjoy for more feedback detail to use in the future.
Love it! Would love to see a sequel especially if there will be a zebra joining in~!
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Glad you enjoyed it. Is there a part you enjoyed more than others or something you'd change yourself? Always looking to improve and shape things around to give more details, fewer details, change pacing, etc... I love hearing feedback from readers, so I would love to hear more detail overall.
Personally, I would love to do a sequel as well, but I don't like doing it right away as it forces me into a smaller thing instead of coming up through my brainstorming during work to get the better and bigger ideas to make a more engaging story for the readers. So if I were to do a Sequel it won't be right away. I also want to do more work with Yona as well, but I like working with the Student 6 Females as well for more crazy adventures that could be had while in school or doing activities while part of a group from the school as seen by my Lost and Fucked story and Animal Husbandry story as well.
So if you would go into more detail it would be much appreciated, if not, that is still fine as well. I hope you end up giving the story another read at some point for its content.
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Points for that guy shaking afterwards.
Also I liked that Yona was willing to take part in the act and was actually enjoying it, it wasn’t just for humiliation or power play.
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There was a little bit of unwillingness to start with, but not a huge amount put into it. Just a pinch you could say to add to how it could play out in another direction if she chose to refuse which would end the story right there type of deal. However I didn't want to force it too hard, but still have an element where it started badly to become something enjoyable for her.
Power Plays aren't normally my thing either, I rather a mutual agreement in all activities, however sometimes it's good to mix things up for some good things. Humiliation is one that people seem to think I write well enough during RP or in general, however I don't think I do it that well.
When/If a sequel does get done, following timeline would carry over that she does agree to it and the feelings are of the mutual kind. However that isn't going to be the case for every story I make, or be the story I next make either. I like to at least get 1 story or chapter out of Tame NSFW before the next Extreme NSFW that way all sides can enjoy, but sometimes my brain finds other ideas that are on the tame side being made more often so it can end in a landslide of Tame stories. However it can go the other way where I have spurts of Extreme.
I'll keep in mind of Mutual Enjoyment for future titles as well as something much more enjoyable than stuff like Humiliation. Thank you for responding with a bit more feedback. It really does help.
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I did enjoy when the teachers started treating Yona like a slut, like their slave and stuffs. I'm always really into that
I enjoyed the story for what it is, don't have anything to change it because I don't think it'd improve the stories for others. I personally would love the teachers to be more mean and didn't actually give her the grades but they still broke her. So yeah I had darker ideas in mind which is not what you were going for in this story
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Well for a Sequel I'm thinking of adding in pet play with collar and leash to give more control over to the teachers, along with making it a gangbang with 4 teachers and Yona. So it could end up with a bit more forcefulness to it, keeping Yona in line for some bits of power play.
Thank you for the detailed feedback though. It certainly helps in letting me see more into readers minds to get some more ideas or alter things in the future for better stories or brainstorming. Do keep a look out for a Sequel. As I've said before it won't be right away, but that doesn't mean it isn't going to happen either. I keep a book filled with ideas to choose from and I pick what is tickling my fancy at the time, especially when art pieces pop up that get more ideas flowing. I also don't mind if people get comissions done based on my story / characters or make fanart of it either. I'm always happy to spread the joy around for all to see.
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That sounds really exciting! She'll be truly broken after that. You mentioned how you like writing for the Student Six girls and am wondering if they should be involved in the sequel too
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I do like the student 6, however, adding just the 4 girls would send that up and over what I've done for characters in a single story by nearly triple. The highest I've done is 3, and for each character, the writing would get very complex at that point. Is it possible yes, is it in my skill range yet, probably not? Just having Yona and 4 teachers would be enough work on its own. They each could get their own story in different ways or be used for something else entirely. Even with Friendship Lockerroom Secrets I had to break it down into chapters to let each one shine and not be as overly complicated to write. I do like the enthusiasm.
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That's understandable, having more characters would be a bit much lol
I'll be honest here, I didn't read the story fully, just skipped over it, the main reason being that I'm not a fan of fetishes like Scat, Watersports. Farting, Futanari or other gross stuff. However, I find the concept of the story interesting and would love to see a cleaner sequel. maybe with another Student 6's girl.
I have nothing against Yona, but she's not my fav among the students. Rather I'd prefer to see those teachers exploiting Silverstream's bubbliness or coercing Ocellus that this is pony tradition or something.
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I appreciate the honesty. I can certainly add this on the list of things that could be done for my Tame NSFW idea pool for another student 6. I can't guarentee when it would release, but I can say it is in the pool to pop up at some point. Thanks for the feedback and for being brave enough to skip through the story to read portions of it to come comment with your idea. Good way to go about something you dislike than outright condemn it. Suggesting an alternative way/character/universe where it could be done without.
Pure garbage. I think you might be the author with the most down votes in total if they counted the votes on all your stories.
Would you ever be up for a commission?
Any chance of a story with Smolder soon?