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I almost want to stop here... Darkness is great and all... But taking souls and using them for your own ends is not (depending on your view of course)
This long spiral into darkness can only lead to disaster. Damned Odin and his Elixir of Awfulness...
My exact thoughts...
I'm sorry, but it just feels like you cramped 10 chapters worth of story into one.
Over the course of 6k words (probably more but eh) almost all the relations built-up have been broken down so quickly and I was almost overwhelmed by how much stuff stuff was going on.
I don't know... It just felt all a bit rushed...
...I actually feel better about this than I have in a while. Things settled down for a while, so when they go down the tubes now I can be confident that. instead of a communication breakdown that should have been avoided, it's Luna's own fault for being such a libertine.
...Speaking of which, did I hear right that Zecora probably sent Applejack those nightmares? Bitch really got what she deserved.