This was very well written and sensual. I rather liked the twist toward the end (heh, double entendre), though I can see by the ratings that some others unfortunately did not agree.

I found you through the brilliant "Trepidation" story, and couldn't resist the "mature" tag on this story. I'm looking forward to reading more of your works!

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thanks so much! though so much was written in a literally last-minute contest deadline rush. i actually wanted it to be even more well-written and sensual. but this comment definitely gives me the motivation to work on the second draft!