I have a Master's degree in brony culture studies!
Twilight has been spending time reading up on the dynamics of pegasi flight for years as she's been learning how to use her new appendages. Rainbow Dash has proved to be a great flight instructor. Now Twilight feels she finally has enough knowledge to speak to Rainbow about the limits of pegasi flight. But what is with this desire to learn more? Is it simply a burst in curiosity, or something more?
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"Sorry twiggles, i can't do that . . I can do gay though i guess?"
And you may want to work a bit on consistency of tenses you write in.
Generally, present tense does not work as well in a story as simple past tense.
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Thank you for the feedback. I’ll get this edited a little later. Tensing is always my biggest struggle.
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If you are having trouble with tensing, try relaxing :P
Cuuuuute twidash 💜💙
I love twilight worrying about and pouring her heart out to rainbow
They are so good for each other, totally inseparable
This was a good fix. Thank you!