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There's honestly quite a lot of background information that gets touched on but you did manage to make this conversation come off more natural and more compelling than an exposition dump would be.
I kind of like how you set up some things here.
Humans somehow made contact with Equestria and saved ponies from enslavement but humanity are far from angels and are dominating the Equestrian states economically and culturally.
There's political tensions between Canterlot and separatist city states but much of the initial turbulence has passed and the question now is whether to reconcile or stay separated.
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It's a good first chapter that helps to establish the background for this world without having to go through the initial First Contact birthing pains and it doesn't seem like it's going for the extreme side of RGRE that honestly got old.
Foreshadowing?
la yegua de cristal y el humano al ver que estaban haciendo las mismas tácticas de violación.
This first was really well written. Pretty impressive to be honest
Love the start. Almost feels like this is a sequel of a series. Didn’t read the description at first since they normally aren’t the prologue as well.