What did she call them again? Zap apples…? Reckon those would make some excellent special reserve cider! I oughta put it in the punch next time we have a party!
OH NO.
Over time, they’d corrupted the previously vegetarian Princess Twilight into eating meat, and by now, Flash Sentry took her to her favorite barbeque and rotisserie places every time she visited.
Princess Twilight has yet to explain to her Applejack why she's become so awkward around cattle.
All jokes aside, very strong first chapter. Looking forward to seeing the variations on the theme.
What did she call them again? Zap apples…? Reckon those would make some excellent special reserve cider! I oughta put it in the punch next time we have a party!
OH NO.
Oh yes! But not to worry. All it’s getting is a mention here. Kind of a nod over to Nightmare Night.
Over time, they’d corrupted the previously vegetarian Princess Twilight into eating meat, and by now, Flash Sentry took her to her favorite barbeque and rotisserie places every time she visited.
Princess Twilight has yet to explain to her Applejack why she's become so awkward around cattle.
Or why she’s suddenly avoiding the pony Fluttershy.
All jokes aside, very strong first chapter. Looking forward to seeing the variations on the theme.
Glad you liked! I think you can guess who’s next. And I already know what variations she’ll get.
OH NO.
Princess Twilight has yet to explain to her Applejack why she's become so awkward around cattle.
All jokes aside, very strong first chapter. Looking forward to seeing the variations on the theme.
clever hint and based on it i think Applejack is next
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Oh yes! But not to worry. All it’s getting is a mention here. Kind of a nod over to Nightmare Night.
Or why she’s suddenly avoiding the pony Fluttershy.
Glad you liked! I think you can guess who’s next. And I already know what variations she’ll get.
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Thanks! She is indeed. And I already know the rough outlines her path of ascension will take.
I was honored to help, even if perhaps EqG isn't my area of expertise. Very detailed transformation scene!
nice work on both chapters out so far
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Thanks! Your help was welcome. You always give good feedback.
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Appreciated! I’ll try to have another chapter out around New Years.
I was hoping for some creampie with Fluttershy, but nonetheless it was very enjoyable and I look forward to next chapters
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Hard to have creampie when your lover is ethereal. but I’ll make it a point to find ways for the girls to get it in future chapters.
You write clopfics really well. I eagerly await more of this story as well.
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I was thinking if this playlist from my Apple Music will be good for your story.
https://music.apple.com/us/playlist/mot%C3%B6rhead/pl.u-2aoqEyvt84R9bK
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Thank you! You will have more, hopefully by year’s end.
Damn! That was extreamly hot ♡
Wow, such extreme ascension. Somehow I am frightened to see the result of Pinkie's ascension.
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You’ll have to wait three more chapters for that.
I so love Fluttershy's design! She is like a Flutterpony alicorn.
It's also coincidentally pretty close to an idea I have for the transformed state of one my O.C.s. Life is funny like that sometimes.
This read like an MLP version of the Aristocrat's Joke
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Well, I can’t claim credit for any of the artwork, but glad you like!
Cool! There’s plenty more by that author over out on deviantart. You can find the link to the artist here: https://www.deviantart.com/orin331/art/Clap-your-hands-Daydream-Fluttershy-629534888
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I had to look that up. Not quite what I’m going for, but if that’s what you think of it, fine by me.