I will be honest, I do not like the changes they went through. I would have prefered it if they kept their original appearances. But this is your story, so what I can I do, ecept unfavorite this.
It didn't take much to decide this looked either like a recluse or a widow, based on its pattern
As a arthropod aficionado, I feel I must point out that Black Widows and Recluses are NOTHING ALIKE!!!. Color, amount of 'hair', body shape, segment proportions, patterning, leg positioning, hunting parents, venom, behavior, even scientic Family are different (The Widow's Theridiidae vs. the recluse's Sicariidae) I could go on. The only things they have in common are a potentially medically significant envenomation, a desire to be left alone, and a total misunderstanding by the majority of humans.
*pant *pant *pant
. . . Sorry. Ignorance (which is not a dirty word, it just means a lack of information about a specific topic) about so called "creepy crawlies" is a big button of mine. The dream metaphor was a good one, but really, it is like saying that a teacup poodle and a great Dane are so similar that it is impossible to tell them apart. And those are actually the same species!
Aside from triggering a rant from me, good story this far. 🕷
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So sorry! I meant to update...
1399975
Whupdate!!! Woot
I will be honest, I do not like the changes they went through. I would have prefered it if they kept their original appearances. But this is your story, so what I can I do, ecept unfavorite this.
Good luck with all of your endeavors.
I like it!
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Welp, good on you for being the bigger man.
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FUSION-HA!
Hmmm, a little short but good. Yeah, it was good.
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Aren't the best clops the short ones?
1399975 take the complete tag down
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WHAT?! You want MORE?!
1403092yeeeeeeessss yessss yessssYESSS MOAR
1403092
More would be good
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1403246>>1404496>>1416095
What else could you want? A chapter where they take over Equestria?"
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yes i dont now bout the outhers if i see that that would be cool... also it would be cool to se some mane 6 interaction 2
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Well, I meant for this to be a short story; I don't want to cross any more lines than what I have to.
MORE
MOAR MUTHA FUCKER! I DARE YOU! I DOUBLE DARE YOU!
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Go to bed, Samuel L Jackson
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....too much?
This is one possible extension of the ending. Just replace imagine Vegeta as the Human and the Dragonballs as...well, you get the idea.
1403092 yes, yes we do
plz don't stop........if that ok whit you
wait? ...It's over? Luckily i see other chapters, if they aren't actual chapters i think ill cry 0-0
As a arthropod aficionado, I feel I must point out that Black Widows and Recluses are NOTHING ALIKE!!!. Color, amount of 'hair', body shape, segment proportions, patterning, leg positioning, hunting parents, venom, behavior, even scientic Family are different (The Widow's Theridiidae vs. the recluse's Sicariidae) I could go on. The only things they have in common are a potentially medically significant envenomation, a desire to be left alone, and a total misunderstanding by the majority of humans.
*pant *pant *pant
. . . Sorry. Ignorance (which is not a dirty word, it just means a lack of information about a specific topic) about so called "creepy crawlies" is a big button of mine. The dream metaphor was a good one, but really, it is like saying that a teacup poodle and a great Dane are so similar that it is impossible to tell them apart. And those are actually the same species!
Aside from triggering a rant from me, good story this far. 🕷
A plain man yes, but you will become something so much more
Love that Adam and Eve thing