Mocha gets kidnapped by Daybreaker and gets to enjoy extreme vaginal temperatures of her and Nightmare Moon. Somehow this nets him an unrelated harem, but he's more a collective toy than the head of it. Mostly femdom ensues.
11013841 Hmm This leads me to think... If they really wanted you to stop writing this kind of thing... they could start commissioning you OTHER things, take up all your writing time and make you a lot of money... That should work, or not?
11115607 People do commission me other things, even if not nearly as many people, but those don't go on this account of course. This one is so borderline on the non-consent, that I could have put it on the other account, but that might have had the same result anyway since many people that watch there probably don't want to see non-consent. It doesn't much matter, it's more an observation about how trivial people are with fiction.
11115923 It would be pretty hilarious if every time they meet Rainbow she's messing up Thunderlane again. I mean one might not blame him for trying to toughen up and going for it again; Rainbow is a catch.
11115979 Yeah yeah I know... but it's a bit like the whole thing with the pro-lifer that are not really acting in the rational way to obtain their stated result... The Prolifer says that what they want is to avoid abortion because life starts at conception... So the BEST way to avoid that is to fund as much contraception as possible, but they don't do that. Here if the downvoter REALLY don't want the hardcore things to get written they could simply pay you to write OTHER things and commission enough things and pay you well enough that you simply don't take the hardcore commissions ^^;;
11116853 This is a commission so it largely depends on how quickly the commissioner can pay. It also depends on my load, which is rather high right now, and where the commission is in the queue, which the next chapter isn't yet. Though recently I stopped taking new commissions to get the projects I have done, so the current stories should speed up once I work a bit more through the list.
also I did not understand what she had did to Thunderlane at first so when twilight put RD to sleep I thought he was going to walk up and be like "do you mind if I finish what I started" and Twilight would be like "just hurry up" .
11117242 No I think it was clear, I just stopped reading it at the part were RD was put to sleep and had that thought in my head. I do that with all story's I read its stop and go stop and go and doing that some times makes me miss line or three. that is why the red book mark line is my favorite thing about about this site. that and like mocha i dint think the pain he was in was as bad at first.
I could see rarity in this scenario pleasure her “partners” in ways that would make her partners dependent on her for pleasure like lust driven slaves. And for fluttershy I bet she would be into beastiality and finds pony dicks lacking.
Somehow, this gave off anime vibes of building up the lead guy by showing how inferior all other males are. Though, I'm curious what will bring everyone together since both princesses are around.
oh joy a new update
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Glad I provided joy
I know it may still be a fair bit away,, but how about Chrislis gets defeated at the wedding by beeing claimed from a more confident Mocha by then?
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Hmm This leads me to think... If they really wanted you to stop writing this kind of thing... they could start commissioning you OTHER things, take up all your writing time and make you a lot of money... That should work, or not?
Thunderlane should just not get it and try again after he gets out of the hospital.
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That'd be up to the commissioner, but I don't think they're planning on taking the story that far.
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People do commission me other things, even if not nearly as many people, but those don't go on this account of course. This one is so borderline on the non-consent, that I could have put it on the other account, but that might have had the same result anyway since many people that watch there probably don't want to see non-consent. It doesn't much matter, it's more an observation about how trivial people are with fiction.
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It would be pretty hilarious if every time they meet Rainbow she's messing up Thunderlane again. I mean one might not blame him for trying to toughen up and going for it again; Rainbow is a catch.
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Yeah yeah I know... but it's a bit like the whole thing with the pro-lifer that are not really acting in the rational way to obtain their stated result...
The Prolifer says that what they want is to avoid abortion because life starts at conception... So the BEST way to avoid that is to fund as much contraception as possible, but they don't do that.
Here if the downvoter REALLY don't want the hardcore things to get written they could simply pay you to write OTHER things and commission enough things and pay you well enough that you simply don't take the hardcore commissions ^^;;
do you have an estimate of when the next chapter is out already, or do you not currently have enough written to make any sort of guess?
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This is a commission so it largely depends on how quickly the commissioner can pay. It also depends on my load, which is rather high right now, and where the commission is in the queue, which the next chapter isn't yet. Though recently I stopped taking new commissions to get the projects I have done, so the current stories should speed up once I work a bit more through the list.
also I did not understand what she had did to Thunderlane at first so when twilight put RD to sleep I thought he was going to walk up and be like "do you mind if I finish what I started" and Twilight would be like "just hurry up" .
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Oh was it not clear enough? Any way it could be clearer?
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No I think it was clear, I just stopped reading it at the part were RD was put to sleep and had that thought in my head. I do that with all story's I read its stop and go stop and go and doing that some times makes me miss line or three. that is why the red book mark line is my favorite thing about about this site. that and like mocha i dint think the pain he was in was as bad at first.
This has to be the most wholesome grimdark story I've ever read. Kudos.
I could see rarity in this scenario pleasure her “partners” in ways that would make her partners dependent on her for pleasure like lust driven slaves. And for fluttershy I bet she would be into beastiality and finds pony dicks lacking.
Are you ok
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I wasn't for a while, but am trying to pick myself up. I hope to start uploading again soon.
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I almost feel like it's grimdark on a technicality.
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have you tried eating a banana they are good for you, until you eat to many then you get radiation poisoning.
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Yes, actually
Please continue! I can... well, beg.
Somehow, this gave off anime vibes of building up the lead guy by showing how inferior all other males are. Though, I'm curious what will bring everyone together since both princesses are around.
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Probably sex. Just a guess.